RickyBoy6
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RickyBoy63yrCommentedCh 26 Hello Everyone!- RickyBoy63yrCommented
I’m confused I thought he had a crush on the girl Serms odd that he would see her as a waste of time
Hunter wanted to ask Michaela about her skill, but figured it did not matter. If she wanted to become stronger, she would have to bring it up with Hunter. He didn't want to waste any effort for someone who doesn't seek strength. - RickyBoy63yrCommentedCh 17 Michaela’s Secret
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He still didn't completely 100% trust Michaela yet, but he was letting his feelings for her get the better of him. Since Hunter lived in the same apartment as Michaela, he got a feel for her personality. - RickyBoy63yrCommentedCh 9 Screaming Girl
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Lady? Maybe Girl is better if she is young and beautiful
As Hunter got to the bottom of the stairs he saw 3 zombies surrounding the lady. The lady's arm was bleeding profusely. - RickyBoy63yrCommentedCh 7 Kendall’s First Skill
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Typo Best not Beat
"There are two zombies down the stairs. I believe the beat course of action is to keep the high ground and lead them up the stairs. They are very strong so make sure not to be hit by any of them, but they are fairly slow." Hunter recalled his last encounter with the zombie and told his sister the details. - RickyBoy63yrCommented
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"There are two zombies down the stairs. I believe the beat course of action is to keep the high ground and lead them up the stairs. They are very strong so make sure not to be hit by any of them, but they are fairly slow." Hunter recalled his last encounter with the zombie and told his sister the details. - RickyBoy63yrCommented
Sister is not likable Perhaps thats intentional If not, work on it Again character devopment is lacking both physical, intellectual and emotional Timeline issues contInue ITs not believable that Hunter droppec out of school at 10 years old Make it more realistic Help reader to care about these kids
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