JP def 🤣

thanks bro :)

thanks brother, much appreciated! :)

also i see what you're saying, but ive got a whole plan out, a process essentially. I didnt want him to immediately become strong af and op like a mary sue character, so dont worry, I hear you and trust the process ;) all love <3

fair... but initially he didnt have pride to begin with, which he later sought out and gained through his encounter. As of right now, its just a beginning of a process but I can see what you're saying 👌

Seen other authors doing this as well so here I am, maybe to inflate review scores? Hehe >:) For real though. Hello, and welcome to my project, book, fanfiction, or whatever, Thrust Between Both Worlds! My passion for SAO and Dragon Ball combined into one big story! What first started as a brainstorm, is now put on paper! (Well, online but technically paper :D). Now, I know I'm not the best writer, hell, I'm still a newbie and novice in this whole thing, but that's why I am so grateful to have this opportunity to share on a platform such as web novel, which consists of so many great readers and writers. Why? Because I can give you all my story, whilst receiving feedback and hence improving! By you guys! Truthfully, I cannot thank you all enough. The amount I am enjoying ad learning at, with each chapter I write and put out (with my dumbass inconsistency, sorry ;-;) makes me just really delighted to keep pushing on and innovating, brainstorming, and writing for this passion project that I am so delighted already to work on and share. And you guys are part of the reason! I know this story can be bad at times, downright trash, with the development of the plot, characters, etc. And I sincerely apologize for that. I will make no excuses on my fanfiction, SAO, and Dragon Ball story maneuvering, telling, and crafting, because there is none to make. It's me and the end of the day writing story, for which I am responsible. But, however, I promise that I will keep on improving and getting better at this craft, and will deliver the best content and story of Dragon Ball X SAO that I can, along with the hope that you embark on this wonderful, and full-of-potential journey with me :) So. I, once again, want to thank you all for supporting my work, it truly means the most to me. Thank you all again. You know who you are! Keep being good people! Love, Reathi123

rags...? I assume u mean rage then. I still don't get what you mean though. Because Saiyans raised on Planet Vegeta do indeed have a fiesty temper... so that is your explanation, canon as well. Not only that, but contextually, you have to see the events of why the character(s) is angry. Thanks for your review tho... <3

oh and I forgot to thank you for your kind words and compliments. No cap, it truly helps and motivates me a ton to keep continuing to write and put my best into the stories I write, as well as improving and learning to become a better write, plot planner, etc. So thank you again, even though these words are just text, I just want to let you know I appreciate you man. I will keep improving and become a better writer, and articulate better and better chapters and stories. love you bro <3

definitely, I need to get some more organization thats for sure. However, I want ppl to view this story as a whole process iykwim. A chapter(s) might seem weird or out of place, but I really put it there, as it is a part of a whole, bigger picture. So i get to lessen the cringe a little bit, and add some more elements, but at the same time, development, whether character or plot is a process, not a single chapter in a whole story. again tho, thanks for your words and support brother, you already know it helps out a ton. Next chapter will be 💯

aight aight gotchu my g, glad to hear you're not leaving :D

But I'll take your advice to heart, you're like my reviewer hehe <3 XD

fair fair

Hmm. Alright I get your points and skrry to see you go, as youve been cosistently commenting, keeping up, etc. Ill take yoir advice to heart and see what I can do with it. Who knows, maybe you might come back. But thanks for your time and input bro, hate to see u go.

well, it just started. Lets see first ;)

then i hope my story when it comrs back soon will help destress you hehe :D <3

yea, new chapter next week i hope. ive just been really busy with school starting again, and taking a mild break. But i will be back very soon!

also crackhead dio wannabe? 🤣

thanks bro, the alicization riding is kinda just like a label so no worries.

hehe ;))