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Carmen_Reynal

Carmen_Reynal

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2020-08-15 JoinedUnited States
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    Is everything ok? There have been no updates in a long time! I hope all is well with you.

    Ch 1077 It's A Gift
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    Master's Untamed Wife
    Urban · XiaoMeeHee
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    “to help her”. Jing is female.

    No matter what, it was more important to have someone who was willing to help him.
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    Loved By An Older Man
    General · Dreamy Coffee
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    This sentence should say “likely” instead of “likeable”

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    Master's Untamed Wife
    Urban · XiaoMeeHee
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    Hi XiaoMeeHee! Is everything ok? We haven’t gotten any updates in a few days. You are reliable to post frequently. Are you alright?

    Ch 1028 Sizing Her Up
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    Master's Untamed Wife
    Urban · XiaoMeeHee
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    Dear XiaoMeeHee, are you ok? I have not seen any new chapters from you in this story in some time. I miss your writing!

    Ch 968 [Bonus chapter] My Mother?
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    Master's Untamed Wife
    Urban · XiaoMeeHee
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    For me to catch up to where you have gotten will cost me almost 27 tokens per chapter. That is way too expensive. So please either declare this novel complete and release the final chapters, or else keep writing. Are you ok? Have you fallen I’l?l

    Ch 514 [Bonus chapter] Instantly Sisters
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    His Contractual Mistress
    Urban · Elise_Elleneth
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    So is this novel complete? If so, please release the last chapters.if not, then please write more chapters. Thanks for a great story!

    Ch 514 [Bonus chapter] Instantly Sisters
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    His Contractual Mistress
    Urban · Elise_Elleneth
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    I want to go back to Harlow please. Too many side and background stories here imho.

    Ch 952 Who Are You, Raphael?
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    The Cursed Prince
    Fantasy · Missrealitybites
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    I am completThe last time I was tracking this story, Hailey was 8+ months pregnant and An attack wsa made on Vincent while they were on the phone together. Now with Shun, Madison and Levi playing with time and Isabella erasing memories, the whole past was rewritten?!? Twins instead of quadruplets? I am going to have to go back 20 chapters and reread to see if I can figure out where you are going with all of this.

    Ch 490 What if?
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    His Contractual Mistress
    Urban · Elise_Elleneth
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal1yr
    Commented

    Hi dear author, are you 0k? You have not added any new chapters lately, and you are usually reliable to add a couple of chapters a week. thank you for writing such an interesting story!

    Ch 258 Evasive Enemy
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    Be Gentle, Immortal Master
    Fantasy · Witchhazel
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    Dear Author. Thank you for having creating a mostly super great story. I have a bit of feedback at this point: So when is the story going back to Raphael and Harlow? I wish you had created a separate story for Raphael and Rowena, this is too much backstory and not necessary to the plot of the original story. When Rowena threw herself into the river of death, and the king told Raphael that he had a thousand years to find Rowena’s reincarnation, the plot should have gone back to Harlow. Rowena’s birth and upbringing is just not that gripping to me right now. I want to know if Harlow is going to fall in love with Raphael or not. Enough is enough. I am taking a break until you go back to and resolve that loose end. I skipped the last 50 chapters or so because I don’t actually care that much about Rowena, I care about Harlow. You could have easily had Raphael give a summary of the Rowena story to Harlow rather than sending us off into yet another plot line that is confusing me as to how this will all come together. I am ready for this story to end. Seriously. You created the Cursed King to give Maxim a chance to have his own tale be told, the Cursed Princess could have given you the space to share this story without dragging this one out so long. Again, you have quite a bit of talent, which I totally appreciate, but I have spent way more on this story one than any 10 printed fantasy novels, which makes me kinda angry. I feel as though we are being milked to keep spending money with multiple cliff hangers that go into way too many directions and much more background story than is required.

    Ch 888 Queen Serena's Anger
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    The Cursed Prince
    Fantasy · Missrealitybites
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    Dear author, What happened? This is a great story and does not feel finished yet. Will you please add at least one more chapter to wrap it up in a way that makes more sense? A Happy Ever After kind of ending? This ending is a cliff hanger. Not a real ending. At least in my opinion. I was enjoying the story very much.

    Ch 174 Come With Me
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    Bigshot, Your Wife Is With Her Tarot Cards Again!
    General · JQK
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    I am so happy the young ones are reunited with the mom and baby! And, an extra paragraph to explain and conclude the abduction would have been great. I am really enjoying this tale, thank you for creating it and developing it with heart and care.

    Ch 224 Reunited
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    Be Gentle, Immortal Master
    Fantasy · Witchhazel
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    Dear Transcended, please add one last chapter to better wrap up the HEA. What happened to the hero and how did he get out of captivity? A wedding or at least a betrothal would be a great way to end this story. Please!

    Ch 170 See You Again (The End)
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    Real or Fake Missy : I Have a Piece of Godly Land
    Urban · Transcended
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    How did she go from going to marry the professor in order to save everybody, to being saved by and married to Markus?!?

    Ch 203 203. Two documents
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    Forced To Marry The Devil : A Crazy Love Saga
    Urban · go_kizy
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    I completely have no idea what happened in this chapter. You completely lost me!

    Ch 203 203. Two documents
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    Forced To Marry The Devil : A Crazy Love Saga
    Urban · go_kizy
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    Hi author, are you ok? We have not received any new chapters in weeks, and I am worried bout you. I am so enjoying this story! Did you get a case of writer’s block?

    Ch 305 Expecting Grandkinds
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    Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son
    Fantasy · Mynovel20
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Posted

    I was truly enjoying the story until the last chapter. The ending was so abrupt and was not explained, at all. I am so bummed, I was expecting a much better ending to the story. It needs at least one more chapter to explain and finish it all to leave the readers with a sense of completion.

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    Real or Fake Missy : I Have a Piece of Godly Land
    Urban · Transcended
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    What?!? How can such a great story end so abruptly with no explanation?!? I want to at least hear what happened to Li Qu and how he got free!!!

    Ch 170 See You Again (The End)
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    Real or Fake Missy : I Have a Piece of Godly Land
    Urban · Transcended
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  • Carmen_Reynal
    Carmen_Reynal2yr
    Commented

    I am an excellent proofreader and editor in English, if you seek one.☺️ And am enjoying the beginning of this story. 👍🏻💖👍🏻

    Ch 1 He's Back?
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    His Contractual Mistress
    Urban · Elise_Elleneth
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