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poorjoe19dPostedI almost vomited. Dumb character development, bad writing, simply horrendous plot. I'm sorry I read this piece of bullshit. Later I went back to homepage to read that the author was writing just for patre..on. I amost feel sorry for his paying readers. Dont read it, or read it and then wash your eyes with some holy water.
- poorjoe2yrReplied to 0_Jordinio_0detailA Blazing Fist (Gamer Insert - Starting in Avatar The Last Airbender)Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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I don't know why but I'm almost vomiting due to this cringe factor.
"Me too, Mione" I hugged her as well. - poorjoe2yrCommentedCh 33 CONFESSION
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cringe
This did allow me to study alone with my mother which increased my progress as well as let me spend time with my mother. In the few years I have known her, she has grown on me. I honestly couldn't believe someone could be so loving, I first thought that she was acting, but realised some people are just generally kind-hearted and she is one of those people. - poorjoe2yrReplied to kiritoyuii26oo
Anyways I'm entitled to display my own opinion, Webnovel would have blocked me if I said something extremely degrading. But all I said is completely okay, the author might get angry reading this and I want him to, just so he can feel my anger while I was reading this cringe. Nobody asked you to be a noisy nosy aunt here. Now go fetch that stick! Good doggy.
"Come on, let's find a way out of here. Maybe find out what is going on." Devin said smiling over his shoulder before continuing to walk. Sue couldn't make heads or tails of this man, but one thing is for sure. Hopefully he stayed on the side of good. - poorjoe2yrCommented
Can anyone recommend quality fanfics like this one???? Legit wanna speed read one :(
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Why do you not use grammarly? Your grammar is really bad, especially in you first few chapters. Please just use grammerly, its free! Also, try to get an editor, use discord to create a community if you have to but please get an editor. Your novel is good but the grammar is making it unbearable to read. I legit want to drop it but only the good reviews of the plot keep me going.
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bro just use the fking grammarly!
Kakashi then go to backyard and after that go to his father room. - poorjoe2yrReplied to kiritoyuii26oo
what do you think i did? being able to identify cringe factor in your own writing is a blessing, which clearly lacks here. So I'm helping him identify it.
"Come on, let's find a way out of here. Maybe find out what is going on." Devin said smiling over his shoulder before continuing to walk. Sue couldn't make heads or tails of this man, but one thing is for sure. Hopefully he stayed on the side of good. - poorjoe2yrCommented
why so cring-eous
'So that's the Third Hokage huh? He is indeed strong. I should be wary of him' Akihiko thought. - poorjoe2yrCommented
bleh
The last century has been productive. I am a master in many different types of magic. It would have taken me longer, but fortunately I have created my masterpiece a decade ago. The masterpiece I am referring to is a cloning spell. The spell lets me be able to get the clone's memories after dispelling or splitting my consciousness into the clone so I can control the bodies simultaneously. The amount of clones I can make depends on my magic power and there are other factors at hand like physical abilities and if the clone will use magic which increases the cost of making them. - poorjoe2yrCommented
cringe
This did allow me to study alone with my mother which increased my progress as well as let me spend time with my mother. In the few years I have known her, she has grown on me. I honestly couldn't believe someone could be so loving, I first thought that she was acting, but realised some people are just generally kind-hearted and she is one of those people. - poorjoe2yrCommented
literal deadpan
Once I learned how to make proper illusions I started playing a lot of pranks on Thor and his friends, although it wasn't anything malicious. I originally only wanted to try something my namesake was famous for, but quickly came to realise it is an amusing activity to partake in and something I quickly came to love was causing a bit of mischief here and there. I guess my soul must have been a bit influenced by the original Loki or I was simply a suppressed prankster. - poorjoe3yrReplied to ProSpectCh 19 Chapter 17: ROTF Prep 1
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- poorjoe3yrReplied to StarDragon"At least I have a nice and fat rabbit to go home to" he teased
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money heist? time heist? space heist?
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