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yitzic5mthCommentedCh 51 Duels When Climbing the Tower- yitzic5mthCommented
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No one knew who was making sound effects, but on the screen, the curves of the remaining few dozen battleships exploded almost simultaneously. - yitzic7mthCommented
yes please
"Agent Orange" Player Two has Entered the Game - yitzic7mthReplied to zenden
couldn't get exactly where it was at, is it below Hawaii and kind of adjacent to South America and Australia?
Among the myriad islands in the country, this particular one stood out as the largest non inhabited island. Its size alone surpassed that of a few small countries, making Aron's intent truly remarkable. - yitzic7mthCommented
in this chapter you say it's Angela and in the next you seem to say it's lily.
Unfortunately that was not who it was, but that wasn't really a disappointment either as it was none other than Angela. What she was doing here I didn't know but I was just glad someone had come to relieve my boredom. - yitzic8mthReplied to Glezeri
i think that meant 20 years total, as in the 20 years it takes for the immortal ascension thing to begin. Not 20 years after breaking through .
It had been five years since he broke through to the Core Formation Stage. - yitzic8mthCommented
This is getting to be a bit much.
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I've heard this a couple times and I think the word you are looking for is strewn. not sewed.
Painful cries came from dying, and injured soldiers sewed all over the walls. The disgusting smell of burning, feces and blood was strong that it was hard to breathe. - yitzic11mthCommented
snakes are venomous not poisonous poison is plant venom is animal.
Another with a potent poison and many more. - yitzic1yrCommented
Author should get to the dictionary of deities and demons, an extremely awesome resource for learning about gods primarily focused around semitic religions and the surroundings. A less historically credible source of names and histories can also be found in Ken Johnson's fallen angels book. it's weird mentioning the two books in the same vein cause one is diamond and the other is dirt but hey it's interesting at least.
Ch 399 The Future War - Spark of Hope, Isaac. - yitzic1yrCommented
how many chins we talking here?
 Ning looked at the girl that was fighting Rachel. She had light ginger hair that fell up to her chins on the side before pointing outsides. - yitzic1yrCommented
yearn haha
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please please please fix this word "exuding" not excluding. I usually listen to audio while I drive and it makes me crazy. I can finally comment. exuding is the word you want. I love the book it's amazing wonderful story thank toy
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yes please
The God of Mischief didn't seem to have given up on the idea of turning Theo into a woman. - yitzic1yrReplied to ByeSpirit
I love this comment hahaha
[Ding. Congratulations! Wind wolf pelts x 500 have been purchased!] - yitzic1yrCommented
' indicates feet already and " indicates inches. Writing 6'7" is enough. "6'7 feet" is a bit confusing and also redundant. Love the story so far, how can we get you to post faster!! <3 I think one of your comments mentioned appreciating corrections, but maybe that was someone else..
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"I trust my little brother." Melody replied plainly. - yitzic1yrCommented
the word kept makes sense here but I think you were going for kempt
Standing upon the core of a pink gaseous planet was Eridel's Avatar in all his white garbed glory, and despite being in such a hazardous location he looked as neat and kept as he always did.