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RougeCazador22dCommentedthis should totally influence the townspeople to create baseball.... no reason as to why... definitely not.....
Rimuru looked unfazed at the speed of the ball as he got ready to bat. As Gobta went flying Rimuru got in position and at just the right moment he hit Gobta. It was picture-perfect form.- RougeCazador22dCommented
I see sleeveless turtle neck and immediately think virgin k.iller sweater....
"I don't mind" she shrugs. "I've got this crop top that will look great on you and a sleeveless turtle neck too" - RougeCazador23dCommented
are you referring to the weapons from bloodborne or rwby? if it's bloodborne, then they're called trick weapons. If it's from rwby, then they're called mechashift weapons.
|Notice: From the Obsidian Chest you have received: 30,000 XP, 1 Transforming Weapon Blueprint, and 30,000 Gold Coins| - RougeCazador26dCommented
now*
-Cosmic Energy (Instead of air, you know breathe Cosmic Energy. All abilities are drastically improved along with access to Cosmic powers.) - RougeCazador211dCommented
ok, I'm so very confused. this story, so far, is exceedingly fast-paced. Like, so much so that you might not even make it to 20 chapters... then there's the fact this is supposed to be a gender bender, but nowhere in the story, so far, have you even mentioned mc's gender change, nor mc's reaction to it. and back in the bio chapter, it said mc has a nine inch. If this is true, then call mc an Intersex or futanari, as both would be more apt and correct. sorry if this sounds like complaining, but I'm genuinely trying to give helpful criticism.
Ch 4 Chapter 3 - Kraguel - RougeCazador212dReplied to LucyAzomonia
I know. but in another fanfic the fmc ate it and said it tasted like rock candy. now it's stuck in my mind. I mean, each type of dust is now just a different flavor of rock candy to me, and I would, without a doubt, eat it myself were I there. Just to see.
Small Vial of each type of dust - RougeCazador216dCommented
trials*
As everyone lines up outside geralt looks the group over before saying "you need to be faster. Now today starts your training, so starting today you will slowly be reshaped and prepared for the trails you will take in the future. If you fall behind you will be left to die. As Vesemir said it doesn't matter your background starting now you are all the same. So you will all be treated the same." - RougeCazador216dCommented
fair*
"Fare enough just make sure I'm down for the count, I can't have you stealing my hunt now can I." Vyr sys cracking a small joke, to which Geralt doesn't acknowledge. - RougeCazador223dCommented
dust is just magic rock candy. change my mind.
Small Vial of each type of dust - RougeCazador225dCommented
sentries*
Walking into the village, past the centuries who were ogling at me slightly, I drew quite a ruckus as I brought with me another deer-cow, the animal's meat being a delicacy for the Goblin Tribe that could hardly survive previously. I had started to gain some small amounts of praise for my effort and I had been tentatively named the Huntress. The nickname was rather basic but that suited me, i preferred a more stable connection to the people against a lofty unseeable position. - RougeCazador230dReplied to RougeCazador2
I should've also mentioned the author of endless new dream is doing a rewrite on scribble too.
Recommend some good RWBY fanfics please. Just because there are a lot of them doesn't mean that all of them are good.) - RougeCazador21mthCommented
endless new dream. it's one I read, and it's decent. though fair warning, most rwby fics are harem. and usually trash harem too.
Recommend some good RWBY fanfics please. Just because there are a lot of them doesn't mean that all of them are good.) - RougeCazador21mthReplied to God_of_Gan
ah I see. gotcha. only had to ask since I've seen a few harem stories with a male Mc in the yuri section, so ya know.
Chapter 0 - RougeCazador21mthReplied to RougeCazador2
I should specify more, relationships are*
Hugging Yuki's back, Elysia says. "Not all relationship is smooth sailing, what happened before is an example. Thankfully, we both understand the ins and outs of the situation. And now, we have moved on, growing closer than ever." Pulling back, Elysia holds Yuki's cheeks, looking in the eye. "The others may have a major headstart over me but I swear I will be a girl that has every right to stand by your side. Even the Mother Goddess would have to accept me, eventually." - RougeCazador21mthCommented
relationships*
Hugging Yuki's back, Elysia says. "Not all relationship is smooth sailing, what happened before is an example. Thankfully, we both understand the ins and outs of the situation. And now, we have moved on, growing closer than ever." Pulling back, Elysia holds Yuki's cheeks, looking in the eye. "The others may have a major headstart over me but I swear I will be a girl that has every right to stand by your side. Even the Mother Goddess would have to accept me, eventually." - RougeCazador21mthCommented
are* it*
Elysia gives a slow nod, a bit glad that the figures Yuki listed a well in the realm of acceptance. In her opinion, Yuki deserves only the best love coming from the best lovers. It's won't sit well with her if a random figure decided to carve a portion of Yuki's heart for her selfish desire. Unknowingly, Elysia let out a sigh of relief, much to her confusion about Yuki. - RougeCazador21mthCommented
that's* been watching or has* been watching either one reads better in this sentence
Yuki nods and calmly answers with a few names. "It's a given that the first person would be Yggdrasil, there's no denying that. Then would come my adopted mothers, Lucifer and Hel, they've been grooming me all this time to be the perfect figure in their eyes, after all. I love them for the family and love they provide, and the opportunity in life they've given me. After that would be Bryn, my second-in-command and the person that have been watching my back all those time at the frontline. Without her, the battlefield would have been a much colder place. I can go on and on about why they love me and how I've come to love every aspect of them. But I guess you don't need to know everything right now." - RougeCazador21mthCommented
picked*
Yuki smiles while shaking her head. "I'm afraid not, my dear. Yggdrasil picks me as her partner and tells me to keep it a secret till I'm of age. Nonetheless, she knows that as a person of my status, and with me already developing feelings with a few figures, she has allowed me some leeway to create a harem of my own. Knowing that, what do you think of me now? Should we cement this relationship or settle down to just being the friends we were before." - RougeCazador21mthCommented
as*
"I pride myself in being forever a kid, in spirit at least," Yuki answered the first question, even showing a V-sign to emphasize her point. "And yeah, same at last time. Thanks for the help, Ningyo, you helping me with all the secretary work, helped immensely. Once you're done, head back here to relax, yeah?" - RougeCazador21mthCommented
party not been* then princess. sounds better written this way than it currently is in that sentence
What I said back then, in a way, would have been insulting had the opposite party was not the Princess herself. Yet, funnily enough, it was a correct assessment. I was both shocked and intrigued by how a person could even admit to being one. This was why to sate my curiosity, we decided to talk.