K, makes sense

Maybe he put the bullet in backwards, though I have no clue how that got outta the barrel if that's the case

Heavy marble: Exists Apollo: *Batman theme intensifies* Heavy marble: *Robin theme intensifies*

Missed opportunity for a JoJo reference here... this scene has the same vibe as "Korega, requiem da."

KAKYOIN!

Also, Apollo is basically Deadpool, not that that's a problem. Actually, I love the way he acts, both of them.

This book is dangerous... as in I almost laughed out loud when I'm supposed to be studying. Only read the prologue so far but this is good shit.

Any feedback is good feedback to me... unless it's something like "This shit sucks." In that case, I'll probably ask for a 5 mark answer on why the story sucks. Yeah, all I'm saying is thanks for the feedback.

Good start... hope you don't mind me leaving edit comments behind... I'll be doing a second reading to see if I missed anything later

it's quit not quited

suggested edit:where - were

Oh, you too protagonist-kun

I loved the story and if it had gone on longer, it may have lost it's charm. All in all, this story ended well and it wasn't too short. Also, sequel. Just because I think this story is done doesn't mean that the world should end. That, and I'd like to see where Alex and Chloe end up.

I would watch this... Good job so far

I just realized it says "say" and not "see"

Bruh

So, she's gonna die or get saved at the last second

wait, so the bully has emotions other than, "bullying is fun"?

Sooo, that hit *hard*. At least it did for me. Just, this girl is probably superhuman cus she takes a ROADROLLA DA worth damage (overexaggeration for ya'll wanting to know how this is) and somehow is still alive... kinda a bit of a stretch there. Other than that...