I like “technological epiphany”

Steady Updates and good pacing. Good action sequences. For fans of Sonic the Hedgehog this Is a solid example of good fan fiction. Give it a read.

Enjoyable adventure story with good friendships. The story moves along quickly and the characters are well developed. The world it is in is interesting and unique, and there is a surprise at the end, but it was well set up through the story and not out of left field.