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Not that much of a start but it seems to hold some potential. Maybe it will become one of that novels whose reviews say: "it didn't seem much at the beginning, but it becomes a must-read once you surpass the n-chapter" If I may, Author, that fusion talent seems really soooo overpowered, being able to fuse objects or skills from different "power systems" so please continue using it well and not only on cultivating skills! I think the fact that he gets the knowledge to understand how the fused things work (a bit shamelessly overpowered ,but I like it) can be quite useful to get the plot going, as not only to teach but to exchange for benefits even from other civilizations! As ,for example, even if they've got magic, they won't have magic-technology or magic-cultivation, magic-biology, (sorry for simple examples) and other strange mixed stuff. I know you've thought of all of it, just wanted to make sure you stay creative :-)
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Io started it thinking it was just another virtual reality thing without any sort of appeal, but it turns out it's a totally different story with unusual development and great, great - did I say great?- writing and good character design. The world building starts and develop relatively slowly but you will almost never want to skip a paragraph, so I can't say it's really slow (unless you don't like the few '****-romance' dialogue between protagonist and girlfriend, which, however, I think are extraordinary well written for a novel) Tu sum it all up, awesome! Keep up the good work, author!
What to say. Wonderful. Really good writing and gorgeous, immense world building. Full of different characters, plenty of meaningful and funny conversations and relationships. Updates every one, max two, days and fantastic author who listens to readers and put effort to offer them a great story with a fantastic MC, with tons of fun but also lore and interesting relations between factions. What else to say, WOW. pls keep up the good work, author. I'll try and support you when I get a stable income. Really worth it.
Really nice. Only downsides I think the fact that the story is a bit slow and that, for how much I love grinding, sometimes I just ask myself if it wouldn't be a bit more reader-friendly to just progress with story/evolution instead. And I was wondering why that much grinding if in the end is able to improve his species of not even an entire grade (rare>rare+ or epic>epic++). If he really is so strong as the others say in the story, shouldn't he have unlocked a super legendary species to evolve into? (considering that at the beginning he says that for one of the first evolution ,if he had unlocked his memory before, he could have evolved in a unique class without that much trouble) . Thanks for your work.