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hope you read this, author. Love the novel, but right now sunny needs to be very smart and farm for his life to get 7 cores. He is an awakened and the level of creatures that can give him shadow fragments is his level and above. Well i suppose that it is not easy to find 1000 creatures of any of the above levels without looong journeys or very perilous lands far away from the citatels. So what should be his plan to maximise his potential? Farm the 6000 shadow fragments right now.
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Another thing, leonel ability is solely focused in him being a super smart computer and stuff. Try and refrain to use him as a punchy punchy super mad naruto kyuubi guy. He should be better than that and use his brain to the advantage in fighting instead of just training.
the drag is tremendous, i am in the hype but if this product presentation takes 10 chaps it just loses momentum. The descriptions of every single piece of person is a bore. 3 pharagraphs per person like OHMYGOD i dgaf if she can tople the world with her beauty just go on
Is a cliche in those stories to have the hardworking super talented mc have the number one fairy of higher status and family/sect/clan fall for him(in this case higher starfield). Than there will be the elders of her saying the mc is not worthy, the psychophat guy who is deemed worthy Will find a way to torment the mc and mc will prove everyone he is super cool and talented, that is, until he goes to the next region and gets powercrept all over again
why does he cares anyway, he still thinks this is a videogame.
He still havent even considered that the appearance of the sect master might be the thing that alerted her old enemies. Or asked the book about the omnimous smoke down the palace. So far this guy is pretty dumb for someone who lived 40 years + 70 years. Im not even going to mention his super idiotic outburst against meng hao cus is better just to forget that giant slob of bad writing.