Ive finally finished this one and sad to see Ray leave this world and not be in the next but maybe one day we will hear from him again and be taken to another grand adventure with him.

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Hmm im having issues going past this to the next chapter 😟 ive got couns and fast passes to read the next one but it wont let me go on from this final page

Honestly i like them both so its kinda hard for me to choose the color of the hair is more noticeable in the seconD one and that all i really can tell but honestly they are perfect portraits of her and is what i imagined her looking like

Same here

Ok so im Just guessing he could possibly do that later on

I do have a Question for the author what is control stats for

Drip this art is sweet man

a great way to end the chapter drip I look forward to the next one and maybe talking more with you .keep up the work and also don't let a few pull you down when do many people love the novel as well

drip the image is good and so is the art but with the way it's explained she doesn't seem like the person who would wear such revealing armour

i say she does look good and who does the art work for you

great chapter look forward to reading more

I can agree with that

if you ever need a hand man let me know

your welcome

so far this has been a good book but the pins or misused words kinda get me at times but still a good read

dont get discouraged bud I like it and I enjoy reading it. don't let one bad opinion stop you.

I've never hear of such a slang word but I also don't use slang words like that either. It just seems lazy to do that in a book or novel.

my question is why some many and not so many. it just kinda seems like someone who isn't used to english wrote this or is this some of the Queens english. like how some people spell color like this but some spell it colour.