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Koltiris

Koltiris

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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris19d
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    I think there might be a missing chapter or two between chapters 41 and 42. The story abruptly jumps from the end of chapter 41 and starts mentioning events that hadn’t happened yet in chapter 42.

    Ch 42 Chapter 42:It
    Propagator of the Flesh and Blood Gospel
    Fantasy · Howl_Howl
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris22d
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    I can’t really imagine a scenario where long term cooperation with a fellow participant is worth more than a wish. Though maybe a good compromise would be to use them to get as many benefits as possible, then when their usefulness runs out the MC can kill them for the wish.

    Xue Xing considered herself a restrained person, but even she contemplated killing for another advantage. She could only assume the other party had the same thought, but worse than hers.
    Reverend Insanity - Otherworldly disaster
    Book&Literature · Wise_Crow
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris22d
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    No need to shame the kid in public.

    "A good poem indeed. Little Dong is truly a genius of this generation." The youngsters were suddenly interrupted by the laugh of an elder who wanted to suck to Long Dong who was the son of one of the most influential elders.
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    Book&Literature · Wise_Crow
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris22d
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    I get the weird feeling that this guy might be compensating for something. Maybe i’m just imagining things.

    "Oh look, here comes Long Dong, the genius poet. I wonder what new poem he wrote this time."
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    Book&Literature · Wise_Crow
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris22d
    Commented
    "Xue Xing." A black haired youngster wearing humble clothes and who could be called the epitome of average if it weren't for his long eyelashes that were longer than women's greeted Alex with a smile.
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    Book&Literature · Wise_Crow
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris23d
    Replied to Sleep1ngDaoist

    After checking it seems that the problem with the format only exists on the mobile version of webnovel. I usually read all my novels through the mobile app, so I didn’t notice this sooner. Not sure if there’s anything you as the author can do about that, or if it’s something that webnovel has to sort out on their end. I’m sorry if I worried you over what might just be a bug in the mobile app.

    Ch 1 The End is Just Another Beginning
    Heavenly Deceiver
    Fantasy · Sleep1ngDaoist
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris23d
    Replied to Sleep1ngDaoist

    I just mean that you should break up the wall of text into paragraphs to make it easier to read. How you structured chapter five is pretty much perfect. Just copy that to the first four chapters.

    Ch 1 The End is Just Another Beginning
    Heavenly Deceiver
    Fantasy · Sleep1ngDaoist
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris1mth
    Commented

    Is there a prologue chapter you forgot to post or something? It feels like I’m reading the twentieth chapter of a novel even though it’s the first. It’s hard to actually care about anything the protagonist is doing if I know nothing about him.

    Ch 1 chapter 1:soul banner
    Legend of Royal Soul Cultivation
    Fantasy · Asxre
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris1mth
    Replied to Ayden12g

    Perhaps, though when I read something like “her brain is completely melted” I’m not confident in her chances.

    "It's a horror, her brain is completely melted. Some of her organs are missing, and some are oddly displaced. For example, one of her kidneys is where her left lung should be. The left lung is completely missing. Her vocal cords were brutally ripped out. The worst part is, we can't operate on her. Because there are a lot of small bugs in her body. And we have no idea what to do with her."
    MHA: Entoma
    Anime & Comics · Apandora
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris2mth
    Commented

    They actually think that she’ll live in this condition even if they somehow manage to get all the bugs out?

    "It's a horror, her brain is completely melted. Some of her organs are missing, and some are oddly displaced. For example, one of her kidneys is where her left lung should be. The left lung is completely missing. Her vocal cords were brutally ripped out. The worst part is, we can't operate on her. Because there are a lot of small bugs in her body. And we have no idea what to do with her."
    MHA: Entoma
    Anime & Comics · Apandora
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris2mth
    Replied to PEFRS

    Yeah, I thought it was strange too that he’s having to put in so much effort so early in the games release. I’ve seen similar things happen in other vr novels as well. Like the game will have only been out a few weeks, but for some reason a lot of the opponents the mc faces are like martial arts grandmasters with powerful gear.

    Ch 25 chapter 25 really another one?
    Reverend Insanity: Insatiable
    Others · Forthememes
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris2mth
    Commented

    This MC really likes to monologue during fights.

    Crim[ it true you see dao marks but if i used other dao marks to distract you, well your no different than me. Those vials release a poisonous gas that lower your ability to breathe. Normally you would see it but thanks to the Molotov cocktails all you saw was the fire path dao marks and then i distracted you with all those poisoned weapons. The whole time you were focused on that you were breathing more and more of the gass. I spent alot of that time holding my breath and when i couldn't take it no more i drank the antidote, but in your eyes it was just poison and thats because poison is used to counter poison.]
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    Others · Forthememes
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris2mth
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    Hope he gave the guy fake information. It’s not like the system would verify the information anyway, otherwise people could just game the system to get all the knowledge they desired.

    Once we signed a contract in the players shop he surrendered. Letting me win the fourth match and gaining the rank 4 recipe for grip gu. Good only two more matches and I'll get the immortal recipe for grip gu
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    Others · Forthememes
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris2mth
    Replied to CreedFollower

    That makes sense. It’s just that at the time of writing this comment the overall situation of the war was kind of vague, and the political turmoil in the clan wasn’t very prominent. So at the time it seemed weird for him to be thrust into the front lines. I’m liking the story a lot so far though. Keep up the good work.

    Although he is talented and has an A grade, someone with talent but who doesn't die for the clan willing is considered worthless for the clan's survival in everyone's eyes, much less than a D grade who is willing to die for the clan's good.
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    Book&Literature · CreedFollower
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris3mth
    Commented

    It’s seems a bit unlikely that the bugs presence and subsequent removal didn’t cause at least some amount of brain damage.

    We stood in front of the mirror. Me, All Might, Aizawa, Hawks, Naomasa, and the doctor. We watched Denki Kaminari, who lay in bed. He was hooked up to various machines and hadn't woken up yet. I looked at the doctor. "So, will my student be okay?" He just looked at me. His expression didn't look very hopeful. "I really don't know; what caused so much confusion was this." He placed a worm in a tray on the table. "It was very difficult to remove; it was attached to his brain. It was on the part of his brain that controls the body. In the end, we got it out of him. Physically, he's fine. The question is how he'll be mentally. Also, the question is whether he'll even wake up."
    MHA: Entoma
    Anime & Comics · Apandora
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris4mth
    Commented

    Do they not practice the magi principle of equivalent exchange in this small plane?

    Lewis' heart winced at the thought of losing the equivalent of dozens of magic crystals, but taking a look at Orianna, it seemed worth it.
    Blood Magus
    Fantasy · Eggcellent
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris4mth
    Replied to blindside

    Yeah, he said himself the carefree wandering technique is much more suited for long distance travel than combat.

    "By utilizing the Carefree Wandering technique, I could become a ruthless mobile artillery."
    Immortality begin with Alchemy Grandmaster
    Eastern · The Rain Keeps Falling
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris4mth
    Commented

    It true that just cultivating would not be enough, but that’s assuming his proficiency doesn’t increase past this point. Obviously that’s not the case. The more he cultivates, the higher his proficiency will get. This in turn will further speed up his cultivation.

    "Although it's comparable to a Quadruple Spirit Root Cultivator, Quadruple Spirit Roots are still considered trash. Moreover, I only have 48 years of lifespan left, so the prospect of establishing my foundation is remote. Therefore, it's not enough to just cultivate hard."
    Immortality begin with Alchemy Grandmaster
    Eastern · The Rain Keeps Falling
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris4mth
    Commented

    Most likely this.

    "Or is it because I killed that short-lived ghost at a higher level?"
    Immortality begin with Alchemy Grandmaster
    Eastern · The Rain Keeps Falling
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  • Koltiris
    Koltiris4mth
    Commented

    He didn’t actually ask.

    "He asked me to join the Broken Mountain Gang and said he would protect me in the future. Why this sudden action?"
    Immortality begin with Alchemy Grandmaster
    Eastern · The Rain Keeps Falling
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