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PritchTheRipper4dCommentedis still not fixed ... been 2 years
Author's Note: Do not open yet, chapter currently being fixed.- PritchTheRipper4dReplied to Warmaisach
- PritchTheRipper5dCommented
try to make sure to delete any of the instances like the paragraph before this one ... there is no need to have it repeat like it is
A while later, the emperor stood atop the city gate, surrounded by the most important ministers and generals of the court. He looked down at hundreds of thousands of people (The population is not that small, but obviously on the battlefield it is impossible to gather all the people) and spoke clearly: - PritchTheRipper1mthCommented
try not to say the same thing twice even though its worded differently because some readers may think you're just trying to boost your word count and it seems tacky ... sorry if I annoy you with these kind of comments ... I edit for a friend of mine and have been reading/editing for years
Soldiers rarely saw their general lose his temper and curse, but they could sympathize because they would also lose their temper if they were placed in the current general's situation. - PritchTheRipper1mthReplied to TheCharacter
I agree completely shameless and that is why I'll give your book a chance ... because I enjoy a shameless author especially if they are willing to put themselves out there and try and poach a potential reader from another author
Ch 1043 Determination Of The Heart [Part 2] - PritchTheRipper6mthCommentedCh 1043 Determination Of The Heart [Part 2]
- PritchTheRipper7mthReplied to Ironhorse77
no it was at my first unit as a parachute rigger after training
What Sam said was true as well, he needed to organise the Cursed faction well. Including the three platoons that would be given to him by Oscar to command. They had quite the large force and that many people in Sam's hands, the pressure was already getting to him a bit. - PritchTheRipper8mthCommented
why would it be familiar to the other guy??
This paragraph has been deleted. - PritchTheRipper1yrReplied to Asura_
everyone gives in to the micro transactions for gaming eventually lol
" I swear I'll find a way to kill you! I'll make us equal even if I have to pour all my money when they activate that function!" He let out as he clenched his fist. - PritchTheRipper1yrCommented
but kind author why do you panic the only thing the same as the previous chapter is the title
This paragraph has been deleted. - PritchTheRipper1yrReplied to Dandroid
it says he locked him in the cellar
"Kek... I'm not arguing with you anymore, you little minx." Bai Zemin grimaced and walked to the right side of the bed as he pulled on a T-shirt. He opened the feather-filled quilt and after lying down on the soft silk sheet partially covered himself all the way down to his lower abdomen. - PritchTheRipper1yrReplied to Darks_Pheonix
could just be using it as a way to show enthusiasm
"Okay!" Belle also followed suit and followed behind him as they slowly arrived outside the Adventurers Guild. - PritchTheRipper1yrReplied to PritchTheRipper
should state I have also cleared the cache 5 times
This paragraph has been deleted. - PritchTheRipper1yrCommented
been 15 hours still no change
This paragraph has been deleted. - PritchTheRipper2yrReplied to Anubesetesh
lol it's obviously their shamelessness that is making them pretend to be for entertainment
Draco, Qiong Qi and Clarent had long clutched each other while shivering, spooked by the horror of the threat and the pure, unadulterated killing intent behind it. This guy wasn't just talking, he was looking forward to make each and every word of what he had just said come true. - PritchTheRipper2yrReplied to No_User_Name_OK
yeah I meant est but autocorrect sucks
"I am your Ninth Wife," Cathy whispered. "There will be several tribulations along the way, but if it's you, I know you will be fine. After all, you represent me." - PritchTheRipper2yrReplied to Yakuze_Honoru
yup sure did ... I've been wondering about it as well
"The first person is known as Clicker. He has the ability to teleport things, items, people, and anything at a great distance with a click of his fingers. Honestly, no one knows the limit of his abilities because we don't know where these people or things come from or how his ability works. We just know it's linked to teleportation. - PritchTheRipper2yrReplied to moone
but ashe and eat aren't sins so that doesn't work
"I am your Ninth Wife," Cathy whispered. "There will be several tribulations along the way, but if it's you, I know you will be fine. After all, you represent me." - PritchTheRipper2yrCommented
wait a minute she said she had older sisters so does that mean that some of his wives are already pregnant?!?!?!?!
"You see, I just want to let the two of you know that my Ma and Pa conceived me in that strange world that they were trapped in during their youth," Raizel said. She was unable to look at William and Lilith whose faces had started to turn weird. - PritchTheRipper2yrReplied to Davidsscope
you think someone as broke as he had the means or even the need to use that though??
When he was still relatively healthy, he would pass by a coffee shop, bearing the same name, on his way to school. Although he wasn't able to enter one, because he didn't have much money, he could still remember that it was a popular place back on earth.