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Astraea_041910mthCommentedCh 62 The Auction House and the Dark Spirits- Astraea_041910mthCommentedCh 45 Terrorism and Decision
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Near the end there seems to be this error where you typed the same sentence twice, perhaps you didnt notice it because its worded slightly different, its about bringing the mc corpse back and the response to it as well is typed twice
Ch 37 Point Hunting and the Prelude to Ambush - Astraea_041910mthCommented
I see, this is edited mtl ? No wonder why the erroneous swap of titles, still i hope the names are at least kept properly, otherwise itll be a confusing mess
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BRO is he a marquis or a baron ? Why does it alternate so much ? Translation is confusing as heck sometimes
This paragraph has been deleted. - Astraea_04191yrReplied to Sweet_Tea
Annoying enough to drop it ?
Sasha gets up from the bed then she uses her speed and appears beside me, she hugs me from behind in a possessive way and says, "He's my husband, bitch!" - Astraea_04191yrCommented"I'm just built different," I said with a small smile.
- Astraea_04191yrCommented"Meow, Meow, Meow!!" Translation: Sup, bitches, I'm home!
- Astraea_04191yrCommented
CRINGE
"Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow!" Translation: Of course I fought, I used that technique called the 'T' pose that you taught me. Using this technique, I asserted my dominance and now I have four wives! - Astraea_04191yrCommented
Betwen animals, the ones who will always wait for you will always be the dogs, if a fire happens the first ones to always run away will always be the cats, clearly this whole dialogue is bias and full of copium.
"Never! And cats are the best, they are silent, quiet, and affectionate making them the best animal there is!" - Astraea_04191yrCommented
I really don't like cats, so this is making me start to question whether its worthwhile to continue or just drop it
"Meow! Meow! Meow...!" Translation: She treated me well, but she bathed me!! I hate that woman! - Astraea_04191yrReplied to DaoistMaincharacte
Delta Beta Gamma Alpha Omega, how about it ? triggered ?
"And he doesn't refuse Yandere's advances, so I think he's safe? The protagonists only die in the anime because he refused women's advances, after all, most of these protagonists were beta men." Leona said. - Astraea_04191yrCommented
Shouldve used 'Sigh!x3' or """Sigh!"""
Sigh! Sigh! Sigh! - Astraea_04191yrCommented
Ive never seen any other novel use "bruh" in it, so this comes out as cringe to me
Bruh, you mustn't say that about yourself with pride. - Astraea_04191yrCommented
Ok, now kill the cat for character development
"Meow?" Even Zack, who was a little distant, meowed aloud. - Astraea_04191yrCommented
Cringe
I looked at my friends with a big smile on my face: "Luan is mine! Just mine! I will not allow anyone to get involved in this, he is someone who hurt me and insulted my mother; this grudge can only be washed away by me, this is my pride!" Only I'm allowed to step on and break Luan, I won't be satisfied otherwise. - Astraea_04191yrReplied to DaoistOoQ2Vx
keyword almost, read pepega
"I heard you jumped from the middle of the court and made a dunk." He continued as he looked at me with suspicious eyes. - Astraea_04191yrReplied to AADucxter_42069"Yes," I said nodding my head, then I answer her question, "I won't castrate him, after all, as a man, I understand Zack; he still wants to have kids, right? Buddy?"
- Astraea_04191yrReplied to ohcasket
Wich clues ? i didn't see any at all, if youre talking about hair color and pale skin, then thats no clue, there are alot of reasons wich could very well be used to explain these apareance traits
I look at her confused; I know I've changed, but does she need to stare at me like she's seeing a rare animal? - Astraea_04191yrReplied to SmasherOWords
So ? He still has the v-card.
"Dude, I'm married now," I said honestly.