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It’s not closed minded just realistic. Their are limits to what the human mind is capable of. For instance, try to imagine a color that isn’t on the color wheel, or try to imagine what it would be like to be blind. You can’t imagine a color you’ve never seen before with out using existing colors from your experience as reference. Also you can’t imagine what it’s like to be blind because even if you close your eyes you would still be able to see and perceive the darkness.
This seems like an eerie allusion to the future when both twins use poly juice potion to turn into Harry to protect him.
Their will be that element to it but he will have to overcome it Just like you said. in this world it does more harm then good, however if I didn’t write his struggle with it it wouldn’ make sense. Having this character just pop into naruto guns blazing killing everything in sight wouldnt be believable and would even be kind of dumb. But yeah obviously he’s a shinobi in the 2nd war era so he will have to kill…..
Just another Shameless author-San review! In this book you will experience a new combination of fiction, that I hope intrigues, as well as entertains you. I am a native English speaker so I hope I would be able to write in a way that is comfortable for your “lookers” to read. Hmmm what else….Oh yeah no Harem sorry about that. I like a harem just as much as the next shmuck, but Peter isn’t that kind of guy. You know it. I know it. So please don’ get too mad at the wasted opportunity.
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Oh never mind I see what happened I feel stupid. Sorry author-Chan 😭
The way it’ phrased makes it seem it’s him who had lived through peacefu times and ls scared because he is now see his first tide A better way to phrase it would be ( if someone else who came from a peaceful land witnessed this scene they would flee in terror.) or something like that so their not any confusion. But it is your story. Just giving constructive criticism.