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myurikko1yrPostedInteresting concept, but being held back by some poor grammar choices and clunky sentence structure. My main issue is with sentences that run on far longer than they should. I'd prefer they be shortened and separated. Like others mentioned, the MC is rather cringy and annoying at times. Some of these same reviewers also say this gets better later on, though I'm not sure what that point is myself (I'm only around chapter 30). Maybe author Pancakes-san has an opinion about that. I do, however, appreciate that Kireina's power is composed of *both* innate OP-ness and clever combinations and utility of her existing skills. I hope that she learns a little self-restraint with horniness and exaggeration though, as it seems Serious-Mode Kireina is an existence on a completely different level than one might expect. In the end, it seems like I'll be sticking with the novel, especially if it continues to improve.
- myurikko3yrReplied to Kitten_0067
Perfectly normal.... right?
I guess I am a special case because of my reincarnation, well anyways I got 3 caterpillars for dinner! Yay for cannibalism! - myurikko3yrCommentedCh 22 Chapter 22: Voice Magic: Sound of Doom
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Plant measurement is a unique idea. Perhaps voice magic has a positive affect on other plants as well?
Currently with Coralia alone inside of the pool, she is humming a very harmonic song that would remind someone of the very essence of nature itself while in front of a plant. Voice magic is a very different form of magic that has its own criterias in allowing itself to be trained. Like how on Earth, to improve your voice, you would perform singing exercises like holding your breath, do exercises, and constantly sing different notes. The same applies to voice magic , voice magic can also be influenced by the songs the mage sings or the words they say. Some strong voice mages could even pass of dragonborn to the greybeards, but that's a joke for another time. Coralia is currently singing, and as she is singing, a plant, with an pink and orange gradient, slowly but surely begins to rise. This plant is said to be a great measurement of the aptitude of voice mages. A voice mage must use their voice magic to allow the plant to grow, the greater the voice magic, the higher the plant will rise. Through constant practice using this plant, voice mages voice magic becomes stronger. Coralia was currently singing to the plant in the hopes to make the plant grow even more than it currently has, rn, it's almost at the stage of a seedling. - myurikko3yrPosted
As the story hasn't developed too far yet, I'm lowering some of the scores. So far, it seems like your typical power-fantasy type story, and there's nothing wrong with that. Unfortunately, errors with spelling, grammar, and punctuation are rather common. It's still perfectly readable, but I feel it's still annoying. Perhaps the presence of an editor would help this. I also feel like the author could work more on descriptive language in order to add more detail and "real-ness" to the story. I do realize I'm being quite harsh to a new author. However, I firmly believe that constructive criticism is beneficial and necessary to encourage growth.
- myurikko3yrCommented
Interesting writing style. I don't remember exactly what it's called, but it's present-tense 3rd person for sure. Minor punctuation errors here and there (mostly just missing periods) but it doesn't hurt the story- still perfectly understandable. The bit about the 'wall' is slightly confusing, but as far as I can tell, it's not something so significant that it would make the rest of the story difficult.
Ch 1 So, where am I anyway? - myurikko3yrReplied to amakusavoy
- myurikko3yrReplied to Moonshine97
how was it explained there?
In tandem with the difference in their powers, Spirit Masters are categorized into various grades, the grades in sequence are namely: Spirit Warrior, Spirit Lord, Great Spirit Master, Spirit King, Spirit Overlord, Spirit Saint and Spirit Paragon with the corresponding colours red, orange, yellow, green and blue, blue and purple. Each grade is further divided into 9 minor grades, with every minor grade depicted by a small star, and a moon depicted one major rank. For example, a sixth grade Spirit Warrior when drawing out his Spirit Energy, six little stars would show by his feet while for a sixth grade Spirit Lord, it would show a moon and six little stars, and for a Grand Spirit Master, it would show two moons, and so on. - myurikko3yrReplied to TAliceP
I completely relate to this
Moreover, the scale was totally different! From the outside it did not look as big as what she was currently looking at. Surprisingly, the size of the first floor was as large as that of a soccer field. Although each level got smaller, however the size of the top floor was still bigger than a basketball court! - myurikko3yrCommented
Literally everyone on webnovel: can't imagine not reading
"You want to read?!" Sima Lie shouted aloud and started coughing as he choked on the food afterwhich he stared at her with a bewildered expression. His huge reaction made the whole kitchen focus on their Young Master, their interest piqued as they craned their necks and threw curious glances over. - myurikko3yrCommented
read the comic, now here for the original!! Here's to adventure and cultivation!!
Chapter 1: “Fifth Young Master is bent” - myurikko3yrCommentedCh 3 The Egg-Fried Rice That Shines
- myurikko3yrPosted
I really love this story! Cooking novels and systems are two of my favorite subgenres and this has both, which is even better! I feel it's also been easy to understand the cultivation elements. I haven't read any novels with cultivation before because they seem daunting, but this one makes it simple for me (at least) to understand.
- myurikko3yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Reincarnated as… What?! (Edited)
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Poor MC!
Everything went blank… - myurikko3yrReplied to PaperbackWriter
Oooh, good question. Maybe it was just abandoned?
The house was now extremely dusty. The tables and chairs were also smashed into pieces, while the remaining bowls and chopsticks were strewn about in a mess. The 2nd floor wasn’t any better than that. Except for the places where he frequently moved about, it was exactly the same as how it was three years ago.