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Each person bears their own burden, each day a repetitive sight; The flame that once kindled motivation now flickers dimmer with every fight. We all feel different emotions, though some days we're filled with gloom, They say life's precious, even in darkness, as rare as happiness may bloom. Tough times surround us, sadness seems to win, Making us crave for an end, so we don't hurt within. Even in my darkest hour, when ending it all seems right, I wonder how God or the universe will guide my life, in ways that delight.
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NewComer71420hReplied to TrackShadowCh 34 Enlistment- NewComer7141dReplied to FloridaboytonioCh 34 Enlistment
- NewComer7143dReplied to GodOfLightning
Okay 👌
Lorenzo's smile widened, revealing a gold tooth as he stepped closer to the cowering man. "Pleasure to meet you, Mr. Richie," he purred, extending a hand stained with soot and blood. "Lorenzo Lupo, at your service." - NewComer7144dReplied to david_kingmakerCh 31 Adam's revenge
- NewComer7144dReplied to DaoistJdI1lV
War is for me is where the actions will begin, it is where the fun is for me writing, I liked to write in my own pace, and if I force myself to timeskip it, I might break the pace I establish myself and the novel will become mediocre afterwards, especially by one long chapter per day I am updating.
Ch 31 Adam's revenge - NewComer7145dReplied to Great_maid_Oni
Well, sorry if I misunderstood your comment 'If you work harder, it's fair to receive more too', clearly I'm working hard enough. But yeah, if you guys want more, then throw more stones. It's only fair that it's only one chapter per day, since 1,600 to 1,800 word count per chapter, it is a long chapter if you think about it.
Ch 30 Small Business and Deborah's unexpected offer - NewComer7145dReplied to Great_maid_Oni
You think I'm not working harder? I literally grind 16 chapters of this novel in three days, but creativity needs a charge, and I don't need to force myself to write content as the quality will just be mediocre. If you guys want more chapters in this platform, vote with power stones. I already promised that I'll post another chapter if it hit top 30, and another more if it hit top 20, but this novel isn't really hitting that since it wasn't the favorite of the majority of the readers like JJK, Marvel or DC, and other famous franchise.
Ch 30 Small Business and Deborah's unexpected offer - NewComer7145dReplied to Great_maid_OniCh 30 Small Business and Deborah's unexpected offer
- NewComer7147dReplied to LongSongGolden
I thought writing it that way clearly conveyed a charming and impressing smile. (or that meaning was clear only to me since I'm the one writing)
Lorenzo's smile widened, revealing a gold tooth as he stepped closer to the cowering man. "Pleasure to meet you, Mr. Richie," he purred, extending a hand stained with soot and blood. "Lorenzo Lupo, at your service." - NewComer7148dReplied to FooshCh 27 Lupo
- NewComer7148dReplied to FooshCh 27 Lupo
- NewComer7148dReplied to Big_Mushroom
Sugar is valuable during world war 2 in USA.
The young men and women perked up, their eyes shining with interest. Rationing had made the sweet commodity a rare treat. "You got extras?" one of them asked. - NewComer7149dReplied to INITCh 26 Ambush (R-18)
- NewComer7149dReplied to Insane_Fantasy
The two people that had feelings for each other for months confessing to each other is forced? Come on, both of them are healthy people, and both attractive as well. And besides, in real life, you see couples out there that are forced as well, doesn't really have much feelings for each other, but they bang because they're curious. And look at Lucas developing feelings for Jennifer during the project Like Crazy, is it really that force?
Ch 206 Unforseen - NewComer7149dReplied to ElG0hary
Just be patient bro. I'll post in another new fanfic novel, the rewrite one, but I won't post anymore about Tycoon of Video Games. I felt like I am relying on AI too much regarding when I'm making chapter about that novel. I can't promise you anything regarding the rewrite if you will like it, but the only thing I'll say is that it will be completely different from my Tycoon of Video Games novel.
Ch 206 Unforseen - NewComer7149dReplied to SirFawzi
It's supposed to be a metaphor.
Lorenzo's smile widened, revealing a gold tooth as he stepped closer to the cowering man. "Pleasure to meet you, Mr. Richie," he purred, extending a hand stained with soot and blood. "Lorenzo Lupo, at your service." - NewComer71410dReplied to Foosh
My bad. I think I mixed my other novel protagonist in this novel, haha.
Hearing that, Deborah immediately shook her head and said, "What do you mean 'saving you'? I didn't save you—you're the one who saved me back there." She had tried to protect Lorenzo, but they got separated when Max's friends intervened. While they held her, it was actually Lucas who pulled her away from them.