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thefirespeaks

thefirespeaks

Lv11

just a strange irregular. email: nathanielpluvio@gmail.com

2020-07-18 JoinedGlobal
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks11d
    Commented

    What is this? A paid promotion? Hahaha

    But yeah, As a weapon, Nokia is technically superior anyway.
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    I Have Infinite Systems In The Immortal World
    Eastern · starry8sword
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks7mth
    Replied to Lazy_Pen_Master

    Hello. Sorry for the very late notice. I will update the story starting next month. Thank you!

    Ch 310 Little Peng, Fifth Disciple
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    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasy · thefirespeaks
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks9mth
    Posted

    I personally liked it when it started. However, my personal "favorable" opinion on this novel dwindled when I began reading until a thousand and above chapters. I didn't realize until then how idiot the main character was. Literally stupid. He could use the system to his advantage but failed to do so. Also, as time passed by, he became more and more of a retarded person, even throwing useless arguments. Now, at 1,000 , he got caught in a situation which annoyed me a lot, that woman in the coffin, she's very annoying and he didn't even find it so. He could've used or at least tried to ask the system about that woman, but only did so, I think, once. Moreover, even though he already knew that the woman is very powerful, he still insisted on provoking her. Very ignorant. I thought he was smart. I know this is a setback but it just annoys me, the development and everything. I have come to not like this at all in the middle latter part of the novel.

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    Ultimate Scheming System
    Eastern · Lord of the Common People
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks10mth
    Replied to mamedh

    i thought so, too

    "The higher-ups asked me to hide for a period of time and come out after the limelight passes. However, I can't take this lying down. If I don't kill you, I won't be able to eat or sleep well!"
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    Hide And Cultivate In The East Palace, Only To Find The Prince Is A Girl
    Eastern · Mechanical Claw
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks10mth
    Commented

    what kind of relieving is this hahaha

    Halfway through, he stood up from his chair. "I'll go relieve myself."
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    Hide And Cultivate In The East Palace, Only To Find The Prince Is A Girl
    Eastern · Mechanical Claw
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks10mth
    Commented

    wth with all those questions, i thought it would be more incredible. am a bit disappointed. hahahaha

    [Race: Human]
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    The Top Player is a Real Cultivator
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks10mth
    Commented

    Black Heaven Sect hahaha I don't recall where I have read this name of a sect from

    Without hesitation, Bai Tian uttered a name that he'd been using since his very first game, "Black Heaven."
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    The Top Player is a Real Cultivator
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks11mth
    Replied to Poet_Of_Deep_Chaos

    Because I am.

    My life is so mundane.
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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    this is ridiculous

    Lin Fan had thought that he was quite well hidden, but what he didn't notice was that Zi Ling was flying in the air above the trees, watching his every move.
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    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    i knew it

    Once Lin Fan had disappeared, Zi Ling revealed a faint smile with a deep meaning.
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    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    she's a bit sus

    Lin Fan quickly shook his hands as he assured her, "No, no, I just have some business to take care of. I will be leaving one of my pets here to protect Miss Zi while I'm away, that is if Miss Zi is willing to trust me."
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    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Replied to StressByMortals

    yu-ka-ris-tic

    Eucharistic War Battleground
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    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasy · thefirespeaks
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Posted

    IMPORTANT NOTICE! I know that I did not update the story for about two months now. However, I promise that I'll get back to this once I finish all of my school works as I am a third-year student and my schedules are incredibly overwhelming. I don't have much time yet to write. However, maybe after a month or two, I'll get back to you guys. I also want to really have a break from Yang Lujia's story. By the way, I am also working on another novel. It's called, "Awakening: The Dark Polaroid". If you're interested and have some time to spare, you can check it out. It's a novel whose premise I found interesting Thus, I decided to begin writing it despite my busy schedule and while I'm on a break on Origin Court. There are still many mysteries to unveil in the novel (OC). Stay tuned! Thank you for your understanding.

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    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasy · thefirespeaks
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Posted

    I like how you outlined your character in a design that would be relatable to your readers. Personally, I love a main character that could make me feel something and that's what made me feel about him. Moreover, as I read through the novel, it was very easy to read, resembling a feel-good novel, the type that would give the readers a sense of relief and belonging, I guess? I've read until chapter 2. Until now, I'm very intrigued at how he will carry out his life in this new world, not to mention, as a janitor. However, some sentences seem off-putting in terms of tenses. I suggest you be consistent with this one as this may distract your readers' attention in the novel. Regardless, to me, they aren't worth mentioning compared to the novel's premise itself. But still, work on them if you want to improve your writing skills further. Overall, it's very interesting. I have already added this to my library and will read this in my free time! Good job, author! :)))

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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    pretty much

    A few hours later he awoke to the same aches and pains he had awoken to earlier, and only then did it register to him, this was no dream. This was reality.
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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    Oh, yeah, definitely not mundane.

    I awoke to an unfamiliar land. One of mystery and marvel. Where there was no mundane.
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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    Just whose voice is it? Haha

    The voice boomed in my head blinding me. I couldn't hear anything, see anything, or think about anything. It hurt.
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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    dude, i don't have any money in my pocket right now hahaha

    Recently I've been hearing a voice. The voice won't stop asking me if I'm content with a mundane life. I ignore it for the most part, but it's been there for quite a while now. I haven't told anyone because I figure they'll look at me like I'm crazy. No. I'm sure they'll look at me like I'm crazy. Heck, even I think I am. I suppose it's just the stress getting to me. I'd see a psychiatrist, but I don't want to waste the money on it. On that note, I'm not quite sure what I'm saving money for. Maybe a car? Or maybe I'm already preparing for children I might have in a few years, and the schooling fees that will inevitably come with. Anyways, the voice wouldn't stop bothering me. Asking me if I wanted change. If I wasn't content.
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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    a f*cked up name hahahaha

    The only thing about me that's perhaps a bit special is my name. My parents named me Di Tou, as in lowered head. It's pretty sad if you think about it, but it was in good wishes... I think?
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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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  • thefirespeaks
    thefirespeaks1yr
    Commented

    Same, same. Hahaha

    Perhaps it's because I'm a boring person. There's nothing special about me at all.
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    The Legendary Janitor
    Eastern · An_Ineloquent_Pen
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