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I personally liked it when it started. However, my personal "favorable" opinion on this novel dwindled when I began reading until a thousand and above chapters. I didn't realize until then how idiot the main character was. Literally stupid. He could use the system to his advantage but failed to do so. Also, as time passed by, he became more and more of a retarded person, even throwing useless arguments. Now, at 1,000 , he got caught in a situation which annoyed me a lot, that woman in the coffin, she's very annoying and he didn't even find it so. He could've used or at least tried to ask the system about that woman, but only did so, I think, once. Moreover, even though he already knew that the woman is very powerful, he still insisted on provoking her. Very ignorant. I thought he was smart. I know this is a setback but it just annoys me, the development and everything. I have come to not like this at all in the middle latter part of the novel.
i thought so, too
what kind of relieving is this hahaha
wth with all those questions, i thought it would be more incredible. am a bit disappointed. hahahaha
Black Heaven Sect hahaha I don't recall where I have read this name of a sect from
Because I am.
this is ridiculous
i knew it
she's a bit sus
yu-ka-ris-tic
IMPORTANT NOTICE! I know that I did not update the story for about two months now. However, I promise that I'll get back to this once I finish all of my school works as I am a third-year student and my schedules are incredibly overwhelming. I don't have much time yet to write. However, maybe after a month or two, I'll get back to you guys. I also want to really have a break from Yang Lujia's story. By the way, I am also working on another novel. It's called, "Awakening: The Dark Polaroid". If you're interested and have some time to spare, you can check it out. It's a novel whose premise I found interesting Thus, I decided to begin writing it despite my busy schedule and while I'm on a break on Origin Court. There are still many mysteries to unveil in the novel (OC). Stay tuned! Thank you for your understanding.
I like how you outlined your character in a design that would be relatable to your readers. Personally, I love a main character that could make me feel something and that's what made me feel about him. Moreover, as I read through the novel, it was very easy to read, resembling a feel-good novel, the type that would give the readers a sense of relief and belonging, I guess? I've read until chapter 2. Until now, I'm very intrigued at how he will carry out his life in this new world, not to mention, as a janitor. However, some sentences seem off-putting in terms of tenses. I suggest you be consistent with this one as this may distract your readers' attention in the novel. Regardless, to me, they aren't worth mentioning compared to the novel's premise itself. But still, work on them if you want to improve your writing skills further. Overall, it's very interesting. I have already added this to my library and will read this in my free time! Good job, author! :)))
pretty much
Oh, yeah, definitely not mundane.
Just whose voice is it? Haha
dude, i don't have any money in my pocket right now hahaha
a f*cked up name hahahaha
Same, same. Hahaha