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PrinceDragneel

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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel5mth
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    He is in serious need of counselling but I will not be the source! I won't help unless he changes and I am the only source of inducing change in his behavior! HYPOCRISY!!!

    There is no way I can correct his behaviour without some serious counselling which would take up a lot of time. So it was all upto him now. He needs to correct his behaviour fast if he wants my help in the future. I was happy that he continued to practice Occlumency despite all this while keeping it a secret from his friends. Maybe there was hope left for him after all.
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to ferferfer2

    That would have been the case if the MC went to Naruto world.

    "Hmm! I always felt that the character design of Jellal from Fairy Tail was cool, lean, and strong, and the eye tattoo or birthmark, whatever it was, was awesome. I would like heterochromatic eyes though. One blue eye, just like the eye of Kazuma from Kaze no Stigma when he unleashes full Contractor powers, and the other red eye, just like Akame from Akame Ga Kill but with a similar glow as the blue eye. Can you add the feature of runes floating in the irises when flooded with magical power? Just the looks, no additional skill or power!"
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to ferferfer2

    Yes, The name came from somewhere after all!

    After the magic finally calmed down, Siegrain could finally open his eyes to check the result of the summon. The first thing that caught his eye was the absence of the summoning circle as well as the magic crystal. When his attention shifted to the results of the ritual, he was amazed to see that he had received all the things that he had imagined, a pair of jet-black Khukri, probably covered in their entirety by runes. As he grabbed the pair in his hands, both of the blades pulsed with blue, green, and golden sheens before he felt the magic in the Khukris settle down. The next thing that caught his eye was a miniature set of a bow and a quiver filled with arrows that looked like attachments to a keychain due to their size. Just when he grabbed them though, he felt the wind rile up as the bow and the quiver changed their size until the bow was 2 meters long and the quiver changed to a size normally used by adult archers. Thinking a little Siegrain closed his eyes and imagined the set at a size proportional to his body size. Opening his eyes, he found that the set had changed to a size proportional to the body of an eight-year-old kid. Taking in the presence, contrary to the pair of Khukri, the bow, and quiver were metallic blue and appeared to have a charm to them. Lastly, he saw the pairs of boots and gloves. They appeared to be normal trekking shoes and gloves until he wore them. Magic pulsed and the boots changed appearance to be covered in metallic bands which happened to be closely spaced rings. When he willed so, upon very close inspection the rings appeared to be rotating at a speed that made them look still. The band covering the toes opened up to reveal a pair of blades pointing to the front and the sole of the boots sprouted spikes that looked nastier than an alligator's jaw. The gloves seemed to hide wolverine-like claws (Wolverine from X-Men, not the animal wolverine) and had slots to keep throwing weapons like knives.
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Posted

    I think your storyline development is good with what your direction seems to be. I'd recommend using Grammarly or maybe Google docs for better grammar. Free versions would do the work and your work will look more engaging.

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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to ferferfer2

    I don't think it serves any purpose other than increasing the word count. When I read HP fanfics, I always skip the song. So, I didn't bother putting in something I wouldn't read myself.

    "Now, I'll read out the names of the new students one by one and when you hear your name called, step forward and take a seat on this chair. I'll place the sorting hat on your head and the hat will announce the house you are assigned to."
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to ferferfer2

    It'll take time for her as she doesn't have the growth skill. She'll be Level 10 by the time Harry goes to Hogwarts.

    After his birthday, Siegrain started learning and practicing the magic he had obtained. He had Ryu do the dungeon walking under the protection of Ace and Garuda to slightly catch up to his level. He wished for Ryu to achieve a level of 10 as soon as possible so she could ensure the safety of his family when he was away at Hogwarts.
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to ferferfer2

    It may or may not be similar as I haven't played Skyrim before. It's from a less-known manga.

    The first grimoire, similar to the grimoire given to Bell in the canon storyline, gave him the magic skill of a one-word chant spell: Impact, an attributeless magical pulse attack. Slightly disappointed that he couldn't get the Chuunibyou to spell Firebolt, he proceeded to the next grimoire and stopped pondering over the spell. The cond grimoire gave Sigrain the much-admired spell or Ryuu Lyon 'Luminous Wind'. Because the spell needed a chant, the grimoire gave something like consolation one-word chant spells of Air-shot, Wind-slash, and Firefly. While Air-shot and Wind-slash were offensive spells, Firefly was a defensive healing spell. The Firefly spell would conjure floating balls of light under the control of the caster and slowly heal the caster and the target. The firefly spell could also defend against wraiths, ghosts, vampires, werewolves, dementors, lethifolds, etc. However, unlike the Patronus, it could not drive away those beings, just prevent close contact as the spell would make them slightly uncomfortable. The spell won't work against a horde as well.
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to ferferfer2

    A mistake on my part. I meant no active familia.

    Next, the library has a record of a sorcery circle that can be used to summon people from the Danmachi world. There is a condition that only people unattached to any God's familia can be summoned permanently. The number of magic cores required may vary on the target summon and the length of stay. Gods cannot be summoned under any condition.
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    Just didn't want to follow the cliche. Also, being muggle-born means no reason for interference from Dumbledore if MC befriends Harry!

    Ch 1 One Tragedy to drown, Another to Rise
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Baba_yaga

    I like it that way!!!

    By the time he reached eleven years of age, he had reached Level 9 with all of his stats at EX+++. He had unlocked several dungeons, all belonging to different types. He also unlocked a dungeon with no land, and only flying beasts arranged in concentric spherical shell-shaped zones. Initially, he had started the dungeon on Garuda's back, but later bought a broom, a surfing board, and finally a fighter jet (magical of course) for conquering the dungeon. It led to exponential growth in his flying skills, and very often, he raced Garuda on his surfboard. He had also received blessings from Goddess Hephaestus, God Vishwakarma (Indian God of Manufacturing, Engineering, and Craftsmanship), God Varun (Indian God of skies and oceans), Lord Hanuman, God Surya, Lord Narasimha, Lord Krishna, and finally the Great Goddesses Kali. All these blessings came with their advantages. The Blessings of Hephaestus and Vishwakarma enabled him to learn skills related to crafting equipment and machinery. The blessings of Lord Hanuman made his body strong and acquire the abilities of a shape-shifter, along with a boost in the affinity to wind and lightning elements. The blessings of God Surya boosted his learning abilities and affinity to light and celestial magic. Lord Narasimha's blessing gave him three skills: Emperor, Lion's strength, and Panthera language. Lord Krishna's blessing gave him the skill: Library of Maya, a library of all magic in and out of existence. Finally, Great Goddess Kali's skill was a skill of continuous growth in the fields of projection, purity, death, and time. All the skills were of the basic level only and despite sounding godly overpowered, every skill granted required an effort of huge magnitude. The Library of Maya was not even accessible with the amount of magic present and from the introduction, the library gave magic one by one. The shapeshifter powers currently allowed only size changing to a smaller size. There was also a cloth-bound book with an instruction to open it after the eleventh birthday.
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to romeotango148

    I feel that a true Slytherin would best found in Hufflepuff

    Hufflepuffs were nice, but that's it. They were the fodder, the no names, those whose lives and deaths were meaningless beyond giving someone else character growth.
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Commented

    Scamander Newt?

    Hufflepuffs were nice, but that's it. They were the fodder, the no names, those whose lives and deaths were meaningless beyond giving someone else character growth.
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Kicks111

    Firstly, thanks for your review. This is just a buildup and the story will get a decent pace when it reaches the point when the original plot starts. Regarding the dungeon feature, it's a way to make the MC overpowered as I'm in for OP main characters. Still, I respect and understand your opinion. Thanks.

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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Mr_even

    I won't. Ryu will be with our MC.

    Ch 3 Plans, Adventures, and Growth
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Mr_even

    I am a fan of the Harry x Luna pairing and my MC will have a close friendship with Harry. When I write a story with Harry as MC, I'll have Luna as a love interest but for this story, Luna will be MC's sister and will be paired with Harry. Crumple-horned snorkack will be revealed soon.

    Ch 3 Plans, Adventures, and Growth
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Mr_even

    MC x Hermione, Nymphadora and possibly a character from Danmachi

    Ch 2 New Life and Blessings
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    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Ballad

    The same can be said about Gandalf from Lord of the Rings but you won't find him to be so insensitive to life. Albus Dumbledore, at best, is a lesser evil compared to Tom Riddle.

    Ben did not know why the headmaster was hurling out playground slurs, nor was he interested in finding out. He did not have a great impression of Dumbledore. Ben knew that Dumbledore was not evil or a dark lord in disguise, but he was manipulative and incompetent and had a godfather complex on top of that.
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    Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Commented

    I don't know why all authors want to follow a fixed template: Ignore Harry Potter, Don't interfere, Join Ravenclaw/Slytherin/Gryffindor but no Hufflepuff, and stay away from meddlesome Bumblefork and other tropes. If the MC is not Harry Potter, he'll definitely stay away from Harry! No creativity whatsoever

    Ben was already starting to regret this, he followed the twins because he didn't want to come in between Harry and Ron's first meeting. He had been a Harry Potter fan in the past, but that was when it was just a story. Now it was real life and he wanted to play it safe, for now.
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    Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Replied to Glucoguardian

    Dude, he said "Garangtuan" is not a word. Pay attention to the spelling! Garangutan -- Garangtuan

    -garangtuan moon dragon animagus
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  • PrinceDragneel
    PrinceDragneel1yr
    Commented

    So after five years, it's only this much then I think your MC will be cannon fodder?

    Vitality: D-
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