Undead_Corpse
I too will obtain everything that I desire. Not because someone asked me to do it, but because I know in my heart that I have something worth fighting for.
Writing
of reading
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Read books
Bruh, I need to stop paying elden ring and dota 2, Lol, CS:GO, Minecraft, Roblos, FNF, Fate/GO, Brawlalla, MGR, Poppy Playtime, Dead by Daylight, Phasmophobia, Paladins, Smite, Skull:The hero slayer, Hollow knight, and a lot of other games. Some times i forget about what i write. Soo... What should I do. Looking at your comment, I can draw some conclusions for myself (for example, that it is worth thinking about something before writing). Any suggestions on how I could improve the work?
đ¶Out of the ashesđ¶ đ¶The eagle rises stillđ¶ đ¶Freedom is callingđ¶ đ¶To all men who bend their willđ¶
Idk, what you supposed to mean by gotcha, but if it's a r34 scenes byte, and then revengance statuse, ye. If you mean a meme, ye. I don't really like storys where MC become super OP, creates a harem, travels to another world, and creates even bigger harem and repeats again and again. Ctrl C Ctrl V is not the skill she can get with her curent magic and dimention. System is weak and don't have any quests.
That's cuz he holded back his power a bit, plus he can regenerate as long as he want, so the only reason he lost is cuz of sun, but ye, i made him a bit weaker than original demon slayer
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yes. To both questions. Actually, idk, if you guys want it, i can try to add it.
Muzan: Why won' t you die?! Nitocris: CUZ I HAVE THE POWER OF GOD AND ANIME ON MY SIDE! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Still trying to improve my work based on your review. I hope to see your opinion in a week or two, because even comparing with my previous works, this one turns out better than the rest. Even so, I hope that people will leave more of the same reviews and comments, saying what are the disadvantages of this work. Thank you for your opinion
don't worry, it's just me being stupid sometimes
We did it, boyz, but we did it too good and right when I went to take a bath. So i kinda missed the moment, but now we had 69 collections. (it turned out that webnovel updates statistics only once a day and this figure was reached 5 hours ago. It would be ironic if this happened 6 hours and 9 minutes ago)
Bruh, i wanted to make a new chapter today, but found a youtuber who said that we live in a 3d and we can only see a two-dimensional picture. That was a bullsh#t and that was the question of honor to put pseudo-physics in his place (just recently my friend stated the same thing with complete confidence, and this video just came out then)
I'm really bad at hitting the right keys