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Sabira_KDS

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  • Sabira_KDS
    Sabira_KDS1yr
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    Alright, all I’m gonna say rn is that this chapter needs some heavy editing. Earlier , there was only an unnecessary repetition of an action.Now, it’s a whole passage.

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    Rise of the Unfavored Princess
    Fantasy · bunnyreadsabook
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    Sabira_KDS1yr
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    He already settled down on a sofa five paragraphs before this one. And you wrote that Winter goes to where he was already sitting.So,we know that all this time he was seated and didn’t get up. Then why would he sit down again? Sorry, not trying to be mean. Just pointing it out for the ease of the author to find the mistakes when editing. :))

    Augustus releases his look of shock and heaves a long breath, his arms finally uncrossing as he settles down heavily on one of the sofas. "I know, Winter. All this I know."
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    Rise of the Unfavored Princess
    Fantasy · bunnyreadsabook
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  • Sabira_KDS
    Sabira_KDS1yr
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    I believe some words are missing from this paragraph.Pointing it out cause it must have mistake gotten deleted or something.

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    altalt
    Rise of the Unfavored Princess
    Fantasy · bunnyreadsabook
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  • Sabira_KDS
    Sabira_KDS1yr
    Commented

    Author sama, are you not going to continue writing this novel? You haven’t posted any new chapters for a year. Please update soon, I’ve already finished reading all the available chapters. In the process I’ve fallen in love with this novel and am very eager to read more.🥲

    Ch 249 The Trial in Hearts
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    Villainess of Hearts
    Fantasy · RachelRuth
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