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Alright, all I’m gonna say rn is that this chapter needs some heavy editing. Earlier , there was only an unnecessary repetition of an action.Now, it’s a whole passage.
He already settled down on a sofa five paragraphs before this one. And you wrote that Winter goes to where he was already sitting.So,we know that all this time he was seated and didn’t get up. Then why would he sit down again? Sorry, not trying to be mean. Just pointing it out for the ease of the author to find the mistakes when editing. :))
I believe some words are missing from this paragraph.Pointing it out cause it must have mistake gotten deleted or something.
Author sama, are you not going to continue writing this novel? You haven’t posted any new chapters for a year. Please update soon, I’ve already finished reading all the available chapters. In the process I’ve fallen in love with this novel and am very eager to read more.🥲