great beginning and character development. author disappears for long period of time and releases chapters extremely late. seems they don't care about their work or their fans and later chapters seem to go down hill. I've been a fan but these multiple long length disappearances and late chapter submissions shows the lack of care for the fans and overall the story. would not be surprised if it doesn't finish. I'd be skeptical to read and fall into an unfinished piece of work. one of the worst reads in terms of waiting for a new chapter and never hearing back from the author. I would recommend to read however be wary of the story never finishing or waiting long periods of time for another chapter

please release another. this cliff hanger is killing me

this chapter is amazing and hilarious!!!

why does the writer add the whole last paragraph I'm every new chapter? story is losing its value in these later chapters. hope it gets better.

this fight is dumb. dragged on way to long.

hmm just a theory but could Sirius and fire sorrow have had a relationship in the past? maybe linked like a loyal follower. maybe that's why she's so desperate to see Sirius. if Bai is the reincarnation, fire sorrow would switch sides and join Bai in the future. this story is sooo good. Huge thanks to the writer! 👏 Amazing !!

did zemin get his sword before going through the rift?

did we ever get to see the stats of zemins sword? does he have his sword with him?

when will we have new chapters? writer is not consistent. great story but having to wait months is dreadful

got it! huge fan. addicted to every following chapter!

I thought a mass release is alot of chapters at a time😶

thank you for the chapters! omg you can't leave a chapter hanging like that. it's like dragon ball z all over again "tune in next time on ...😱"

amazing!!!

yayyy writer is back!! please more chapters!