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I like the story so far, initially the writing was a bit awkward maybe because it's in a first person perspective which can be difficult to write... However as the story progresses it gets noticeably better. within the first five chapters there is an idea of the power scaling and how things work in the world. Not much details about the system yet but I hope to learn more as the book progresses. Very interested in seeing how the initial misunderstanding is cleared and how the MC will get his revenge.
pffft straight... mhmm
.... 🤔... she kinda has a point... I guess
My naming sense is atrocious!
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This is an interesting story in the sense that the character was reincarnated in an alternate reality with nice parents... But that makes me wonder, what will the MC be doing? There is no revenge to take? There aren't much changes to make considering that the reality is different itself. I have no idea how this will progress but I'm curious to see so I'll add to my library and wait for an update. Thank you for the chapter!!
lol how do you know how the BigBang sounded?... were you there?? sus
I think you should get that checked 👀🤣
Sure he will 👀
I started reading this on an empty stomach and my brain went 'big words'... So I paused after the first chapter, gathered my slumbering braincells then continued. The writing style perfectly matches the futuristic setting, but even more than that, it brought to light the personality of the MC. Distinguished gentleman? Nope !!🤣 As the story progresses you'll realize that he's just someone who pays attention to details, maybe even a little too much. But that's what makes him so hilarious. To describe a person being impaled as if it were fine art. Almost as if, it was something he saw daily. All while shamelessly making a tactical retreat. 🤣👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 Brilliant! Excellent writing! Very interested in seeing where this story is headed.