MC has a pure trash personality, story concept is good but MC tears it down tragically

Hey author, after the Shadow Clan, is there a reason that the MCs companions just up and disappear and he suddenly starts behaving like an idiot? I personally like your story but that was just out of nowhere...

Don't promote your novel on somebody else's work. Just asinine and scummy

This chapter was exceptional. It showed true leadership but mixed with the arrogance we love to see from Victor and the pride and thirst from his wives.

Alan once again proving he's a dumpster fire MC. Everybody says he's "smart" and "mature" so many times and yet not once has he proven to be either.

The sex scenes are solid and the concept was decent. Unfortunately, the MC is a pathetic dumpster fire and Kath is possibly worse. Neither of them have any improvement and at times even devolve which damages the story.

I think the underlying plot is actually very good but what the author does with it turns to crap largely due to massive character failure. The artwork is excellent which I think everybody agrees upon overall. This could easily be a 4 star to 4.5 star story if the characters didn't fail so hard.

Yoichi acting like a complete moron during the meeting made no sense as former commander. Even if he did with just a withering glare, Haruna should be able to make him sit his dumb butt down. Really liked his character up to this point too... ruined

And then he runs and hides lol

It started disappearing after he started refining powers after the inspiration from Pepper's homemade manga/light novel she wrote about him

World build is excellent, everything else about it is trash. Characters are garbage, especially the MC who is probably the worst cultivation novel MC ever. Plot is 100% recyclable which is absolutely sad since it wastes this amazing world build that has amazing potential. What a waste.

Unless he was born by immaculate conception this is a plot issue since only virgins can be converted.

Comic is phenomenal. It always amuses me when they try to kill him and when he crushes them they say "if you do this we will will hunt and kill you". Some stories act like he should be all "oh noes, maybe I should let them go", but this one rightfully has him respond "like you aren't going to anyways" and BOOM! Love it.