JaZ13jAz
of reading
123
Read books
Fantastic, a really amazing piece of writing, the character development is amazing, world building great, grammar awesome, no complaints. The Author wasn't happy with how they continued after the Silisia arc, but I loved the pace and how it is progressing so far, if the author isn't happy with how good it is I can't wait to see what they do to it now. I eagerly await the new chapter, thanks for the great book
This novel has everything, a great story, character development, romance and action, can't fault it. Grammar and spelling is really good and if there are mistakes they're so small that they don't effect the flow of the read. I would 100% recommend this novel, only down side is having to wait for the next chapter ;)
From beginning to end the story grabs your attention, the author does amazingly at creating a mental picture for the characters and the world, with his awesome descriptions and detailed backgrounds, your allowed to really feel how the characters are meant to be. The only downside is that I felt the ending was rather abrupt and ended in a bery “simple” manner Other than that an incredible story from start to finish, yes the start is similar to TBATE but the auther adds his own essence to the story and takes it in a new direction after the first few chapter
I Think youve done well setting a decent pace within these last few chapter, allowing information that is needed for the development to seemlessly flow into the story via switches of POV, im really enjoying the development and only looking forward to see how it continues