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CheekClapper2K19dReplied to CheekClapper2KI guess u can replace all the ash with ‘I’ but I ain’t know how that would affect how smoothly the story reads
Ash von Agnus's POV- CheekClapper2K19dCommented
Don’t know how to fix the problem either but just wanted to pint out the POV ain’t consistent. “I” is used along with Ash’s inner thoughts but then you also used Ash’s name to refer to himself-making it a first to third then back.
Ash von Agnus's POV - CheekClapper2K19dCommented
Patrick was b ranked in last chap?
It was as if someone was choking him he felt like he was about to die right there. Even Patrick, -S rank awakened, couldn't endure it, but his survival instincts told him to flee. However, he couldn't leave the prince behind. The only thing he could do was eliminate the threat before him. - CheekClapper2K1mthCommented
Is this what spurred her addiction? Does his actions in the past impact the future?
However, the twinkle that appeared in her otherwise lost eyes and the way she was devouring the chocolate bars so eagerly made me think of her. - CheekClapper2K1mthCommented
Pretty sure Korea doesn’t use yen, they use Korean Won
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Honkai reference?
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Wha up 👴🏻
—> WhatupNigha: Dude, why did you give this novel a castle? The author's second novel is trash so this one might be one too. - CheekClapper2K2mthCommentedKingOfKinglessWorld *: No matter how bad this novel becomes, I'll stay here till the end.
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Bro setting up death flags
"I keep a photo of my wife and my kids in my wallet." - CheekClapper2K3mthReplied to Black_Eyes140
I suggest you check the glossary, maybe then you would have a better understanding. Ancient relics aren’t nearly as good as you think they are
Arthur received a historic-grade sword from Count Chase as a reward for entering Class A. However, all the other Class A students already possessed ancient-grade relics, so I was on board with the idea of standardization and fairness. - CheekClapper2K3mthReplied to Black_Eyes140
Realize that these ancient grade relics are given to princes/princess and those of similar status, they command entire kingdoms, your average student probably won’t have these ancient rank relics
Arthur received a historic-grade sword from Count Chase as a reward for entering Class A. However, all the other Class A students already possessed ancient-grade relics, so I was on board with the idea of standardization and fairness. - CheekClapper2K4mthReplied to CheekClapper2K
Much*
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“I am” - doesn’t make mischief sense prehaps the butler question was supposed to be “you think u can win?” or nyx’s reponse itself is botched
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Was platinum grade next chapter
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I ain’t no expert but if you forget everything won’t you have to relearn the language too?
"I don't remember anything, who are you?" - CheekClapper2K6mthReplied to CheekClapper2K
My bad the not next but the one after that
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Doesn’t he use mana on the next chapter?
This book has been deleted. - CheekClapper2K9mthCommented"Yeaaaaaahhhh, surely that's what happened. You were just walking by and they instantly fell in love with your godly charm. What are you, the MC?"
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If he ends up being one of the last few to leave after cleaning up the school, why does he clean in the morning? Who making the school dirty after he leaves, Casper?
My job was over for the day; I thoroughly cleaned the Academy Campus from top to bottom, from floor to ceiling, and from room to room, making sure that not a single dust particle remained.