cant understand a single paragraph re edit

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

the story is pretty awesome cant wait for more new chapters are one of the things i look forward to everyday updates are pretty good wish it was 2 or 3 chapters a day but alot of work to come up with 1

loving the new chapters keep it up great work

giving all books that show up in my libary as recommended a 1 star i pay to read books shouldnt have to deal with adds and pop ups in my stuff just money hungery app soon ad im done with this book im out

wasnt one of the tournament rules to be under 18

great work its a shame u have to work with being able to write like this guess the website takes most the money from people unlocking chapters

great book couldnt stop reading only thing i dont like is only have 3 chapters left and seems like the realease rate has dropped will it pick back up or working other books atm?

just wanted to say on page 2 u said ray looked at the board instead of gary but love the book by the should release as an actual book on playstore i would buy it