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DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommentedZixu is falling in love like a blushing bride, and yujia is busting fires and thinking fast ! this is the first time i;ve read so many chapters of a book and not been disappointed, it means so much, it makes me wonder whether authors grow out of or grow with the pieces they write
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i'm sorry but i can't help suspecting Xiaoyi, she can't be all that cute and sweet
A large, excited smile growing across her face, Yujia responded, "Little sister, I believe I have discovered a thief." - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrReplied to NingShu
Can you remind me again what elder rebellious sister you are talking about? I forget haha
"Not unless they find your body." - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommented
HOMEGIRLLLLLLL!! TERRIFYING IN THE BEST WAY!!! no one plays with our tough girl baddie Yufeng!
"Oh, did I cut you?" Yufeng asked, pursing her lips again. "I'm sorry, I did have a few drinks as well this evening, and I think my hand slipped. Didn't I warn you before that my hand might slip if you tested my patience?" - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommented
This has got to be the best author on webnovel. She does her research and it shows, and she always puts out such quality work. Everything is done with such purpose in this novel, I always wonder how authors manage to not get lost in their own plots and forget about their own easter eggs and questions brought up, if it were me I'd need a map to navigate my story ahaha! Also, thanks for saying you will try to avoid that trope, because it honestly disgusts me when MLs just force themselves on women and its fine because they are handsome ??
Ch 272 The Detective Brings Out the Knife - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommented
MY GIRL!!!! SEE THIS IS WHY I REFUSED TO HATE U FROM TEH BEGINNING!!! AT LEAST U WERENT SKETCHY!!!
Standing behind him, a long plank of wood still raised in the air, was Xie Yufeng. She looked at the body on the floor with distaste, then looked up at Yujia, an expression of distaste on her face. - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommented
OH MY GOD WHAT THE HECK!! ok i never trusted him but he has to be an acutal criminal ???
"Brother" A'Yan. - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommented
ok this thought process is just so captivating!
Yujia took a few steps forward, walking right next to the well. There was a wooden cover, which she slid off. She held the lantern in her hand cautiously over the edge, trying to catch a reflection in the water and noticing that there wasn't any shine. The well was indeed dried up. - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommented
ahhh its definitely a clue
Like the previous results Yujia encountered, she didn't find anything too suspicious. There was a glimmering necklace with gemstone beads that Yujia dug up in a jewelry box, but after thinking about the list of items Madam Zhang recorded as missing and discovering there was no jewelry with earthy-colored beads like the one Yujia discovered, she assumed that the necklace must've been either a heirloom, something the owner was gifted, or something that the owner bought on their own. She tucked the necklace back into the jewelry box and quickly left the room. - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrReplied to Sebastian_mechalis
Shouldn't it be either Coptic or Arabic for ancient egypt? At least for the later times
Damn it, I'm supposed to be lost she whispered under her breath in Hieroglyphic (ancient Egyptian language). - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrPosted
Looks like I'm one of the only negative reviews here. To be honest, this book enthralled me for a good amount of the first chapters, up until her meeting with Gable and going back home, and this is what I have to say: Many of the first chapters do qualify this book as the hidden gem everyone says it is: its gripping, touching, and also sweet. But now, I find that there is absolutely no sticking to the plot and no development at all, even when clearly interesting points were brought up, such as Rosa being "Negative" and how she could see Gable or whoever. Instead of building slowly on that, we get Rosa making soap, pizza, and doing every single thing there is except anything with any relation to the plot. I want to make it clear that I am not at all against the whole "growing up with Rosa" idea, in fact I enjoy it and find it very novel, but that doesn't mean that the plot that is established in the summary and around first third of the book has to be abandoned. And if the author does ever read this, I want to say that the reason I'm leaving such a long and critical review is that I truly did fall in love with this book, which is why it makes me upset to see it continuing sloppily and without direction. Another note, the dialogue honestly gets very confusing at times, with no dialogue tags whatsoever. Just because characters are speaking at a moment does not necessarily mean that all other description should be left out, but that may be my personal preference. Anyways, thank you for the fun read that it was, but I don't think I will continue with this story. There was so much i wanted to found out!
- DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommentedCh 28 DIY Soap
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wasnt there that a couple chapters ago, where we see the wife of Yujia’s master with a breathing tube in the hospital? I really really hope this isnt something like Yujia has been hallucinating ever since that orange paint incident and everything is a dream !! I dont think it is but if it is i swear i will never wear the color orange again !
Ch 270 New Friend of the Detective - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommented
ITS BEEN KILLING ME FOR ALMOSRT 300 CHAPTERS WHY ZIXU LOOKS LIKE WU HAO???
Ah. Young love. Yujia remembered her days back in high school, with her crush on Yu Zixu's lookalike, Wu Hao. Wasn't she also easily flustered like this? - DaoistfLn9Dz3yrCommentedCh 269 Moving and the Detective