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El_Libertador

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2020-07-04 JoinedUnited States
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador22d
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    Zelda is a good choice as you could pick a game with a relatively low power ceiling like windwaker and have him grind a little by saving people with link by blessing him so he wouldn’t have to take as direct of a role and could act as more of a supporter while he builds his foundation but also write in good original storyline if you want.

    And what world do you want Amon...Alexander to go to?
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    Custom Made Archangel: The Rewrite
    Anime & Comics · Dr_Armstrong
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    El_Libertador1yr
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    Apprentice fire magic

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    The Black Necromancer
    Fantasy · Nilo_A
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Posted

    I loved this novel so much until they made him a ghoul for no reason whatsoever. It ruined the story and made it utter garbage. I don’t recommend reading at all it is the biggest disappointment I have ever read.

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    I Didn't Choose the Gangsta System, the Gangsta System Chose Me
    Fantasy · JhiThan_Ser
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
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    I feel you should restart and take things more slowly for yours and our benefit. You shouldn’t give him a teacher any time soon because that will slow down character development so make him do solo training and grinding where he repeatedly encounters adversity and grows mentally and physically. Lower his human conscience but keep the pride he exudes as a characteristic of his race. Companions shouldn’t be introduced until you’ve cemented him and his position if at all. I personally enjoy solo Mcs much more and find them more intriguing. Good look and keep going I love this novel and its potential.

    Ch 15 Author Note: Help!
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    MY EVOLUTION SYSTEM
    Fantasy · LordNephilim
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Commented

    STOP THE CAP

    "Indeed, father. Except for some basic concepts and things, I seemed to have lost everything in my memories. Though, now that I have spent some time with everyone here, I seem to get a familiar feeling that comes from deep within me.
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    Epic Of The Demonic Sage
    Fantasy · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
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    My favorite part is when you when you call her it.

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    The Cheat Seed
    Fantasy · Sinadin
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Commented

    The mana should be 600. Why isn’t it included?

    MP: 355 +10 INT:51 +2 +10 (1INT= 5MP)
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    Search *Demon's Evolution* To read book.
    Fantasy · Horny_feet
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Commented

    355*

    DEF:300 +20 DEX:60 +4 +5 (1DEX= 5 DEF)
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Commented

    3770*

    HP:3472 +50 CON:372 + 5 (1 CON= 10HP)
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    Fantasy · Horny_feet
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Replied to El_Libertador

    I don’t want to spoil anything for anyone so I won’t go in depth but his brother refuses an opportunity that the protagonist gives which severs their bond. However he does continue to make a family but the family being fully formed currently at this point is still questionable based on certain things that happen.

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    The God of the Undead
    Games · ThatFroggyBastard
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
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    3720*

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    Fantasy · Horny_feet
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Posted

    This novel is by far the best one I’ve ever read and I’ve read A LOT. The story sometImes moves a little too slowly and there are a lot of typos but besides that it’s a diamond in the rough.

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    The God of the Undead
    Games · ThatFroggyBastard
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Posted

    It good. yeah

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    Single Stat System
    Games · Jimar_Jemar
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  • El_Libertador
    El_Libertador2yr
    Replied to DogWithHat

    Amazing novel with great storyline that gets you hooked in immediately.

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    Blood demon leveling
    Fantasy · zad1333
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