Jak_Pei
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Jak_Pei7mthCommentedSaltz master ambushed her way earlier. great work, but get these little mistakes straightened out
Felix soon focused on trying to get to the ground as fast as possible unbeknownst that Saltz Master was the one who ambushed Serenity inside the thunderstorm, killing her instantly!- Jak_Pei7mthCommented
wasn't serenity killed by already in chapter 535?
He didn't give a shit that Serenity had died during the Thunderstorm as he knew that one lightning bolt striking at the perfect time was enough to kill a player without strong defenses. - Jak_Pei1yrReplied to WiseRagnar
Less of a complete inability. more of a choosen way of looking away.
If there was one thing Max could count on in human nature, it was that they would never simply give in and give up. A large portion of them would be willing to die for their beliefs, even if they were shown evidence to the contrary. It was fundamental to the human psyche. - Jak_Pei1yrPosted
It starts out quite well and the type has a lot possibilities. But then you get some bad one dimensional characters quite fast: oh you offended me or I don't belive you, I will just attack you. Also the world development iis very limited and seriously one-sided. Everything must only be for the best of humanity, without any realistic considerations of how people actually act.