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Again with those close to him , ahhhh its been a while since this novels mc has changed from him to his friends who gain strength with out doing anything
Hard work?!!! All of the work was done by micheal and the just endure some pain. How funny, hahah being the pampered twins of supremes is considered hardwork . Ahh always with his friends , so disappointing
U said in previous chapters that though to no one knowing anything about this cultivation technique the others who used it their design was messy and wkth alot of fault and he had to go to a whole unque linrary and…… for his design and now u say his design would be as good as others and only aliitle better???!!!!!! U are ridiculous plus i am sure when his girlfriend comes they are foing to have a fight and u would say that she has elite powers . Booo
U said in previous chapters that though to no one knowing anything about this cultivation technique the others who used it their design was messy and wkth alot of fault and he had to go to a whole unque linrary and…… for his design and now u say his design would be as good as others and only aliitle better???!!!!!! U are ridiculous plus i am sure when his girlfriend comes they are foing to have a fight and u would say that she has elite powers . Booo
Realy author?realy!!!!! U mentioned that no one absolutely no one had the strength of elite while being emperor ever now u change it and maybe u already gave his friends elite or near elite powers .boo
Again with him helping others its getting annoying hear us author especially if we found out that his friends have elite powers while being emperors this was said to be impossible so change it
at the start there were some minor problems such as the chapters being short and the discription of the events that happened were realy minor but with time it has greately improved , suggestions :the murder and R_18 scenes are too short and with little detail i think u should work on them more . improving them can attract more readers i believe