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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41331yr
    Commented

    You should first fx your release rate and make yup for the chaps you didn't post, on time and didn't release extras next days, then expecct people to vote

    Ch 2670 The Orb
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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Again with those close to him , ahhhh its been a while since this novels mc has changed from him to his friends who gain strength with out doing anything

    All these essences are important to me, not only for me but also for the people I am close with. Gaining the essence fruits from them would go to help me extremely.
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Hard work?!!! All of the work was done by micheal and the just endure some pain. How funny, hahah being the pampered twins of supremes is considered hardwork . Ahh always with his friends , so disappointing

    I am not overestimating; it is my fair assessment seeing their talent, their bloodline, their inheritance, and the hard work they put on advancing.
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
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    We were supp to have 5 chapters yesterday but not only we didnt yesterday even today we only got 3

    Ch 1955 Seed
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    One of the few novels witch is worth every power stone , good job author you have improved By leaps anf bounds

    Ch 86 Party (2) **
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    U said in previous chapters that though to no one knowing anything about this cultivation technique the others who used it their design was messy and wkth alot of fault and he had to go to a whole unque linrary and…… for his design and now u say his design would be as good as others and only aliitle better???!!!!!! U are ridiculous plus i am sure when his girlfriend comes they are foing to have a fight and u would say that she has elite powers . Booo

    Ch 1921 Coming
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    U said in previous chapters that though to no one knowing anything about this cultivation technique the others who used it their design was messy and wkth alot of fault and he had to go to a whole unque linrary and…… for his design and now u say his design would be as good as others and only aliitle better???!!!!!! U are ridiculous plus i am sure when his girlfriend comes they are foing to have a fight and u would say that she has elite powers . Booo

    When it finished, my Inheritance would be amazing; its grade would be no lesser than that of her Excellency; there is even a slight chance that I might be able to surpass her designs.
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Realy author?realy!!!!! U mentioned that no one absolutely no one had the strength of elite while being emperor ever now u change it and maybe u already gave his friends elite or near elite powers .boo

    "It is really hard to believe this impossibility; I could count the people with my fingers who had achieved this feat before," the Teacher said with a sigh.
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Again with him helping others its getting annoying hear us author especially if we found out that his friends have elite powers while being emperors this was said to be impossible so change it

    "Here, you take any three of the plants you want," I said as I placed five transparent runic boxes in front of her. I have recovered a total of twelve plants, of which five are being desired by my runes, and the other two would be very important to two people close to me.
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Best chapter so far , LFG

    Ch 59 The Hunt (10) **
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Such a great chapter , fell in love with the novel from it , so pls do not drop it . If u could do a mass release it will be most welcomed

    Ch 4 A Bloody Meal
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    I Rank Zero
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Many days ago i said u are writing a new novel so it can be contracted by webnovel so what happened?

    Ch 356 Roses with Thorns (2/2)
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    Lust Knight
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Replied to Betaa_Btx

    I dont think i get it

    Ch 1845 Restricted Astral Space
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Ok so u say that there is a huGe gap between elite and noneranked so lets hope that when he reaches elite stage strength his anNoying friends do not other wise the whole story would be ridiculous

    Ch 1845 Restricted Astral Space
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Posted

    at the start there were some minor problems such as the chapters being short and the discription of the events that happened were realy minor but with time it has greately improved , suggestions :the murder and R_18 scenes are too short and with little detail i think u should work on them more . improving them can attract more readers i believe

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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Posted

    Is it being rewreiten ?? Will u keep an stable updating or it will be dropped again? If its the same will u give us a mass release so it can attract more readers?

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    The Order Of Chaos
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Great chapter .

    Ch 25 Compensation **
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Can chapters be longer ? I think u could add a little more details? [img=update][img=update]

    Ch 24 Brewing storm
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    Its going to the right direction

    Ch 23 The Perfect Murder
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  • Pouya4133
    Pouya41332yr
    Commented

    I Wish u Wrote a cho aBout how she had her first Kill

    Ch 21 Trial
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