Shitty grammar, but I stil love it. Keep em coming author this is awsome. Just improve the sentence structure a bit. Don't lose steam and continue to improve.

Great story bro. I love these types of novels with a bad ass Mc. Your world building is out of this world to. Keep it up bro because I like it.

Great. I love these types of stories. I hope author can keep the pace because this is lit. Love the world building and Mc personality. Love the weapons as well.

Notice. Love such short stories with lots of drama and passion. Such stories are really rare on Webnovel. Im gonna support this great author.