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grind, panthera.
OK author "r*pe or r*ped" are not the word you need as that is the action of on forcing themselves upon another please avoid this mistake in the future as I can cause some who have experienced such things to trigger their trauma from the event and please fix the mistaken usage of such word as soon as possible
as for the ninja technique or style classification ninjutsu covers the jutsu's like rasengan, fire style and such taijutsu - hand to hand combat fuinjutsu- sealing arts bakinjutsu- covers weapons that arent shureken or swords shurekenjutsu- shurenkin or kunai based attacks if you are having further difficulties with translating certain things the wiki stuff is usually great otherwise, comment or reply to my stuff on here and I will help as best I can as I am enjoying your book so far
zankensoki or zankenzoki don't remember which way is spelled but that is the combined name for the courses. also for most technique names or zanpakuto names and release commands the wiki pages for them are a huge help. and asuachi is a non bonded or untransformed zanpakuto
zanjutsu is slashing or swordsmanship, hakuda or hand to hand fighting, also what about kaido training is it covered so that you actually have healers in unohana's squad
so is this kind of what you are talking about
I read the OH GORGEOUS. part in the voice of the angry reacts guy
hey author you may want to change this part about damaging the dungeon. in the danmachi world once the dungeon itself it's damaged enough beyond just chipping or scratches it will summon a juggernaut to protect itself and destroy the being who damaged it to that extent
alternatively use batman detective vision unlock condition solve a previously unsolved or mishandled case
properly guess information of a certain amount of unknown things and be correct. ex correctly guess the purpose of a gadget or machine ect
unlock condition: force someone to confess their sins or discover a person's hidden sin
unlock condition: help heal or give first aid to a living being upgrade condition: heal certain amount of living beings
unlock condition: make someone who has sinned a lot or committed a major sin confess or fear you upgrade method make a certain amount of sinners repent or face their sins
penance stare og user: the ghost rider uses: the user looks into the eyes of a sinner and makes them live through the sins as the person the sinned against making them live through the pain they caused to others limits: the stronger the person is compared to the user determines how many sins the target goes through weakness: if the user is majorly stronger than the target and the target has many heinous sins it can lead to mental over load of target to the point of knocking them out or in extreme cases death
eyes of a Saint or healers eyes uses: able to heal others in the user's line of sight limits: the more serious the injury the longer it will take to heal and healing uses some of the user's stamina and strains the eyes the longer its used. weakness: if over used can lead to temporary blindness while the eyes recover from the strain
eyes of sin or sinners eyes og user: the ghost rider ability: allows the user to see the amount of sins someone has committed in their life and focusing on the targets sins allows the user to precisely see all of those accumulated sins limits: only works on people within a certain distance weakness: focusing to see all of a individuals sins forces the user to watch all of that person's sins for the user he watches it like they are happening in real time to others he stares for a few seconds