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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz14d
    Replied to TechnexGames

    I love your story and have been following from the beginning. I know our beloved author has real life issues that make writing virtually impossible at this point but the continued attempts at posting despite it all still warms my heart. I’ve read so many original novels on this app and very few maje it to 100 chapters and only an extraordinarily small minority maje it to 200. This world is so much richer and better thought out than many other similarly themed novels that it would be a shame not to see what more the story has in store. As long as the author hasn’t given up on this novel yet I will continue my voting to give my (often silent) support.

    Ch 209 Mother's fate
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    Restarting From Genesis
    Fantasy · TechnexGames
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    Author doesn’t know the correct use of they’re, their and there… and it’s been in like 4 chapters in a row at least too

    The goblins finally found there lost courage to attack after all the humiliation they went through, so they raised there axes and black bats high as they shreeeeched and ran towards the 50 plus mages coming towards them
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    Umm…his inspect skill though?

    Although Alec wasn't able to inspect Draco's golems, he now had a clearer idea of what to do for his own golem plan.
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    I know the grammer occasionally sucks in this novel but at LEAST get the chapter title grammatically correct! It’s “taking A hostage”

    Taking An Hostage
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    That is EXTREMELY strange since his EARTH affinity is peak not his wind affinity

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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    Oh no…author has gotten way too myth happy…asura from India, Greek monster for arms and now Japanese mask?!? Author…dude…just make up your mind for each golem and if you think one myth is too cool to pass up just wait until our mc can give you a new golem to customize

    Only that this particular samurai had six hands attached to its side (the two hands at the back were now by the sides) and was a golem who kept on looking like something an Oni (means demon in Japan) has possessed.
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    Weird choice to go from Indian to Greek myths but just make sure it’s all accurate

    The Asura Gegenees golem - This is a golem which had a remarkable fusion of ancient Greek mythology and dark sword demon lore.
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    Oh my goodness! The writing quality jumped way back up!!! No major grammar spelling issues at all

    Ch 24 Small Breakthrough
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    The grammar and spelling have somehow gotten worse. I have yet to find a single paragraph written in plain English without run on sentences, blatant misspelling and grammer nonsense. It’s like the author is just publishing the very first thing he writes withoyt even reading through it once over… an editor or at the very minimum a proofreader needs to get hired or else everyone will give up on this novel despite its fun aspects

    Ch 23 Power stones & Power crystals
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz23d
    Commented

    Wiped*

    " we would all be wipe out by that zombie cause am sure not even one of us can catch up to it's speed " Alec explained
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    The Golem Mage
    War · mystic dark
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz26d
    Commented

    Super manipulative chapter this one. Not happy with our ml this time

    Ch 15 Chapter 15
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    The Star Around The Sun
    Realistic · clarysage
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    Too bad he didn’t bother getting one when he actually had the money though…

    It muttered about wanting a new collar every time Jiang Hao approached. He ignored the beast. Getting a new collar was too expensive, and he didn't have many spirit stones right now.
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    Cultivating In Secret Beside A Demoness
    Eastern · Red Chilli Afraid Of Spiciness
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    That is legitimately weird at this point… like all of his money was wasted for absolutely no reason at all now and that is just so frustrating to read

    When he returned to his room, he realized that the Half-Moon Blade was gone. He sighed. 'Why do you have to steal my blades, Hong Yuye?'
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    Cultivating In Secret Beside A Demoness
    Eastern · Red Chilli Afraid Of Spiciness
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    Why on earth would they be targets when they have never made him an enemy though? I’m struggling with their leap of logic. I do get feeling afraid of something unknown that you can’t understand but even just blaming their deaths on a secret treasure would make more sense

    "That's right. If it happens, wouldn't that be a disaster? It would mean Junior Brother Jiang has some special ability to even subdue someone in the late and peak stage. Someone more powerful than him. Do you think he would let us off if he thought we posed a threat?" said Zheng Shijiu. "You are in your early stage, and I am in the late stage. If he killed those two, it wouldn't be difficult for him to get rid of us either."
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    Cultivating In Secret Beside A Demoness
    Eastern · Red Chilli Afraid Of Spiciness
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    Blood kin hopefully so go full vampire spell caster. Demons go crazy too often but a buff vampire is very…handsome since I don’t want to get too crass

    It seems that Blood Magic Grandmaster Gog had made an agreement with a powerful and mysterious Blood Demon or Blood-kin. Thus, he managed to create this Blood Pool Codex that is able to strengthen one's blood.
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    Tanky Mage System
    Fantasy · Black Sky
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    Very unusual to have there be a physical arrow in addition to the fire.

    Waving his hand lightly, Fire Arrow was instantly formed and ready to attack. It was about an arm's length and a finger's thickness; the pure black arrow appeared beside Gurney. At the same time, all over the arrow, there was a thick and intense flame burning continuously, lighting up the surroundings.
    altalt
    Tanky Mage System
    Fantasy · Black Sky
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    The names seem right but the order seems off…

    The Nether State Continent was divided into four cultivation realms: the Transcendent Realm, the Celestial Being Realm, the Saint Realm, and the Great Emperor Realm. The Transcendent Realm was further split into four stages: the Nascent Stage, the Foundation Establishment Stage, the Minor Mahayana Phase, and the Golden Core Stage. Only by transcending the Golden Core Stage and entering the Celestial Being Realm could one truly be considered a formidable force on the Nether State Continent.
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    Invincible Starting from Max Level Attributes
    Eastern · one foot of the south wind
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    I’m not sure if it’s the translation or what but this seems super off

    The physique signifies talent; comprehension determines the destiny; endurance influences cultivation, and spiritual sense represents potential.
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    Invincible Starting from Max Level Attributes
    Eastern · one foot of the south wind
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz1mth
    Commented

    Boring choice

    Using a sword was more appropriate.
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    I Can Exchange For Comprehension
    Eastern · Master of Yuelu Mountain
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  • dmacrulz
    dmacrulz2mth
    Commented

    The mc seriously has terrible luck… these nobodies have tracked him right away twice in a row despite him not making any obvious mistakes. Hopefully his bad luck isn’t sone corny running joke that gets old fast

    The searchlight continued to shine further. The messy shoe prints had become orderly, and four shoe prints extended a trail into the distance.
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    Monster Synthesis Master
    Games · Zhuge Wanjun
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