I like the style or your drawing, it's very well done, however I don't like how the main character has every girl clinging to him, it's so basic to see that happen, other then that I do really like the story line. You have done an excellent job on the Character design, I think you especially did a great job oh his little sister and little squirrel, just saying when I see the lil squirrel I get so excited because you designed him to be so adorable. Also I'm sorry it I come off serious and a little mean.