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Reiverus

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A novice writer trying to get better at their craft while also indulging in reading.

2020-06-24 JoinedUnited States
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    Reiverus4mth
    Replied to Unimwoshi_Ogbeche_7256

    There's a tiny bit of romance. Not a lot, though.

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  • Reiverus
    Reiverus7mth
    Posted

    my second and last review as an author for Biohuman... Man, I gotta say, its's such an honor to write something I've been ruminating on for years! Biohuman is finally ended and if you haven't read all of it or are waiting for it to finish, go and read! Now that I'm done with the book I can say characters are great. I like making relatable characters, different dynamics and putting them in a world not so different to ours. Lee Seng may not be the BEST character, but who isn't perfect? It's a slow read and the free chapters will really allow you to either push through it or not. Writing, in my opinion, does get better .there are mistakes as my eyes cannot see everything šŸ˜­ but I tried my best to write something interesting. Definitely potential for me to come back and explore the world, but for now... Thanks for supporting me! Follow me on Instagram and Twitter @reiverus_ You'll see what I'm up to and eventually another story will happen.

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    Reiverus8mth
    Replied to freshfries847

    Thanks for the review! I am English speaking. Everything written is written in English. If it feels translated, it isn't.

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    Biohuman
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    Reiverus11mth
    Replied to wuffleluv

    hahaha yeah, it is. I wrote it knowing I'd probably get a response like this .

    "The only person who's been in and out of me is my brother!" Lee Seng pointed his sword at the woman. She raised an eyebrow at him and Lee seng cocked his head. "Wait, that sounded wrongā€¦"
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  • Reiverus
    Reiverus1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 The Man in a Fox Mask
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    Reiverus1yr
    Replied to Erewon

    I wasn't thinking about it then but it does fit.

    Lee Seng spent most of the time catching up on books he hadn't finished. He had just read a book about a boy and a dragon and wondered if things like that could be real. The fantasy books of old were often long, but they were well worth the read. Lee Seng felt like he was reading into a small part of his reality. Even if the books didn't line up with the modern era, he knew the information could come in handy.
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    Reiverus1yr
    Replied to devonsmeven

    It's a Korean Last name that sounds close to Ock/Oak. but yes, that's her name

    "Olivia Ok. I'm headed to Gymnasium C. Where you going?" Olivia shook his hand. Lee Seng let a smile out.
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  • Reiverus
    Reiverus1yr
    Posted

    A fellow author must have time to read, too, right xD I'm really digging Shadow Slave so far. I like the titles, names of skills, characters. They're really unique and the theme of Sunny's whole schtick is so satisfying. I'm only 19 chapters in, but I definitely am craving for some more! Great world building so far! I think that Chapter 0 really helped give a lot of background information but the author does a great job in explaining in the Novel as well. keep it up!

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    Shadow Slave
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  • Reiverus
    Reiverus1yr
    Commented

    I love that even his name foreshadows what he is. It fits the theme so well

    [Wake up, Sunless! Your nightmare is over.]
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  • Reiverus
    Reiverus1yr
    Commented

    So I was right with my Kdrama brain šŸ¤£

    And here he was, able to enjoy an unlimited amount of pristine, delicious air like a second-generation chaebol.
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    Shadow Slave
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    Reiverus1yr
    Replied to Gene_Guirand

    Thanks for the catch!

    Ch 107 Forced Transformation
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    Reiverus2yr
    Replied to little_moon_fox

    Currently a dyed Brown fading back to black .

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    Reiverus2yr
    Replied to Nico_Rupprath

    I question this all the time, too... My one regret.

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    Reiverus2yr
    Replied to Lazy_Chicken_God

    There will be romance!

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    Reiverus2yr
    Commented

    Oblivious until I got to Beauty and the Bestie šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ Had to reread Disknee ans I just died

    The songs he recorded were Disknee Songs that he had loved since he was a child. Songs like, Do You Feel the Love Tonight, Fly the Distance, My Whole You World, and Beauty and the Bestie.
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
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  • Reiverus
    Reiverus2yr
    Commented

    oh god šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

    Lily gave William a big grin. "Big Brother, come, choose me as your Patron God. I promise that you won't regret it. Remember, jail is just another room. Out of sight, out of mind!"
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  • Reiverus
    Reiverus2yr
    Posted

    Hey everyone, Author here! Just wanted to pop in and write one of these reviews like every author does (from what I've seen). I just wanted to, firstly, thank you all for reading Biohuman. It means a lot to me that there's people other than myself who are enjoying Biohuman (at times even disliking it.). It really does help solidify how real writing is. :) So thank you all for reading and following along Lee Seng's journey! Just wanted to pop in and note some stuff since 270~ chapters have been released (wow!). 1. MC is whiny early on. It does taper off and I'm sorry he came off that way early on. I don't know what I was on but I wanted to show this duality with the MC early on and pretty much went overboard with it. 50-60 chapters in and it does taper off. His personality starts to shine through as a hothead and a patiently impatient person. 2. I feel like it's my lack of writing this but I'll specify here. He does have Fox ears. He's a fox boy and has powers that come into fruition because of that. 3. 270~ chapters in and there's a lot more exploration on Fox half and Protocol half. More exploration in other areas but you'll eventually understand more about both halves by the end of Volume 1. I'll probably put another review out in the future, but I just wanted to clairfy some stuff and give thanks to supporting Biohuman! [img=recommend] It means a lot to me! Put please do let me know what you personally want more/less of, what you want to explore, etc. I will try my best but I will say Volume 1 will come to an end... I don't know how much chapters will be before we hit that, but it will end and I do have something up for Volume 2. :) Thanks for reading this far. Thanks for supporting. Please do let me know of the following if you wish to voice your opinion on it: - What you want more/less of - Grammatical issues - Spelling issues

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    Reiverus2yr
    Replied to Dubstepchancez

    I didn't connect this until now šŸ¤£

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    Reiverus2yr
    Replied to Vanessa_Kendrick_1660

    He has fox ears

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    Reiverus2yr
    Replied to FoxCube

    Awh, thanks for reading! I'm glad to hear you want more!

    Ch 102 The Small Figure
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