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Nartrious2yrCommentedYeah aguardian is dieing!
"Peonia isn't completely wrong." Lith sighed. "Manohar's death made me realize that even those I deemed immortal can actually die. A war is nothing like the battles I fought in the past.- Nartrious2yrCommented
O go to jail Legion.
Back into her bed and without the Fury between them, Lith felt awkward when Solus suddenly wrapped her arms around his neck. - Nartrious2yrCommented
I feel you sis
Solus had a second serving of stew before asking for a steak and roasted potatoes. Once her stomach was as heavy as her heart, her life didn't look so bad anymore. - Nartrious2yrCommented
Yeah i call BS
"Thanks for your help in the Royal Court, Jirni." Lith said, unaware of what was happening just a hundred meters away. - Nartrious2yrCommented
She is not spoiled, but there are bad and then there are BAD living experiences.
"Is this what you think of me? That I'm a spoiled brat who chose to throw away her life on a whim?" Friya asked. - Nartrious2yrCommented
Can we have a side story about this?
"I've already proven to you that I know how to keep a secret so your kinks are safe with me. I'm not one of those White Griffon gossipers who go around saying that you, Nalear, and Wanemyre had a thing that ended badly, leading to her rebellion." - Nartrious2yrCommentedCh 1622 Life and Death (Part 4)
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Too soon dude, too soon!
After bringing Lith to visit Sinmara, Xenagrosh had found her desk filled with so much paperwork that the late Mirim Distar would have died of old age before being done with it. - Nartrious2yrCommented
I get it, but rude, in this case, my man didn't deserve such disrespect.
"I missed you so much, sweetheart!" Morok threw his arms at Quylla and she threw Bloodbind at him, slamming the Tyrant against the ground just like she had done with the Rezar the day before. - Nartrious2yrCommented
Ok, but go a little easier on the references bud you gave us a few too many.
It was quite an awful fight… this guy's punches and kicks were like some Dragon Ball character or something, I was on the border between life and death… - Nartrious2yrCommented
What a losser
I hope… if there is a second life waiting for me… that I can find a girl one day… - Nartrious2yrCommented
You just siad he doesn't care,
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OK , I get that you don't care about the backstory, but your prologue is so emty, the novel would have been better without it .
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OK, why?
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How does any of the information in this paragraph make any sence?
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Framed for what. If you are starting drama, comit to it. Just framed is an emty statement that your viewers will not place any importance to.
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What farm?
His best friend had a secret feeling for his girlfriend. After the news about his relationship with the most popular girl in school was known to others. The news proliferate like a wildfire in the farm. - Nartrious2yrCommented
You are maiking a highschool kid sound way too important.
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O boi ( Mario voice) Here we GOOO!!
Call Me Grandma (Part 1)