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D_R_00124mthCommentedKinda got the characters and their actions bassackwards. Howard hands over the father and Kaedyn hands over the treasure
There, Howard would hand over the treasure, and in exchange, Kaedwyn would release his father.- D_R_00124mthReplied to Duncan_Ives
Most daughters think their daddys belong on a nearly untouchable pedestal. Most think their dads can do little to no wrong. For some it is unacceptable for their boyfriend/husband to surpass daddy.
Her father had five wives; as long as Howard didn't exceed this number, Ying Chan had no objections. - D_R_00124mthReplied to OracleOphi
It is the fault of the translation program. It sometimes F's up and can't/won't translate some words. Not the author's fault.
窗体顶端 - D_R_00124mthCommented
Then again it could be the translation program left it out.
Even without Howard, both Nick and Mike felt confident they could inflict significant damage on the Kobold Captain, if not outright conquer it. This gave them the audacity to mock the - D_R_00125mthCommented
Quick anatomy lesson. Spiders secrete webbing from their abdomen from spinnarettes. Special glands that mix the chemicals needed to make the webbing. They don't "spit" out the webbing from their mouths.
As Caitlin's subordinates spread out, the swarm of spider monsters initiated their attack, ejecting strands of white silk from their mouths which stretched out like ropes towards the group. - D_R_00125mthCommented
Did anybody else notice that when H's dragon killed the spider, there was no notification of exp gained, no coin amount, and it was only bronze coins?
Would he spit blood in frustration if he knew that Howard was just a level 11 magus? - D_R_00125mthCommented
Unless I and others are miscalculating, H should be up to SSS ranked spell not SS.
Howard intended to carry on with the synthesis, yet to his dismay, all 293 Frost Arrow Spell skill books had been completely consumed in the process. - D_R_00125mthReplied to ConCaveCanyon
This is my calculation also. H should have 37 F ranked books left, which he could combine to at max, an A rank, a D rank, and an F rank left over
Howard intended to carry on with the synthesis, yet to his dismay, all 293 Frost Arrow Spell skill books had been completely consumed in the process. - D_R_00125mthReplied to It_Is_Me_Ttt
If it had, that would be a short fight scenario. Author would have had to add more stuff to the story instead of prolonging the scene. Lol
The sky was aflame with Exploding Fireballs creating havoc through detonation, Scorching Firelines slashing furiously, Fiery Rings exercising control, and a blazing onslaught delivering crushing blows — each skill that found its mark eroded a significant chunk of the Serpent King's HP. - D_R_001210mthCommented
Anyone else notice the beginning of each chapter starts with the last paragraph or two of the previous chapter? And how short the chapters really are when you get rid of the repeat of the previous chapter and the authors begging for PS at the end of every chapter?
Ch 91 Chapter 91: A pleasurable Threesome! [R-18+] - D_R_001210mthCommented
Lauryn was the one most recently riding Alex. Get the names of the characters and their genders straight
Nyssa bounced enthusiastically on Alex's cock, savoring the hard pounding that his shaft was giving her. - D_R_001210mthCommented
Another case of incorrect name usage. Nyssa is supposed to be fiancee.
Aureal turned to Alex, her expression thoughtful. "I stand where I have always stood, with you," she replied, a note of conviction in her voice. "But I will also stand up for myself and my beliefs. I refuse to be controlled by anyone or anything, even if it means going against the angels themselves." - D_R_001210mthCommented
Hold the F on! Lauryn is supposed to be the witch. Author/proofreader is getting sloppy not only using incorrect pronouns but now mixing up names.
Nyssa expressed her appreciation and continued, "Reading was how I passed the time throughout the day. Given that I am a witch, I have always had a strong fascination with flora." - D_R_001210mthCommented
Is Batibat male or female In this paragraph the "her" pronoun is used. In the next paragraph the "his" pronoun is used. It has been inferred that Batibat is male previously but female pronouns keep popping up.
As Asmodea became more focused on her meal and Alex, Batibat took the opportunity to add her own insights to the conversation. - D_R_001210mthReplied to D_R_0012
Lauryn
However, in Alex's case, only Lauryn, Aureal, and Nyssa were permitted to sit next to him, with Nyssa being the only one among them who wasn't married yet. - D_R_001210mthCommented
Um......excuse me, but Lauren and Auriel aren't married as yet.
However, in Alex's case, only Lauryn, Aureal, and Nyssa were permitted to sit next to him, with Nyssa being the only one among them who wasn't married yet. - D_R_001210mthCommented
Hold the F on! Earlier it is written that she flew, with her wings to the desert where the guardian of the book of spells was at. So how could she have removed her wings? And her eyes when she drove a car to school to impersonate a history teacher.
"But..." Alex looked surprised. "You mean to tell me that you, too, fought in the same tournament as Batibat, and you removed your eyes and wings to win?" - D_R_001210mthCommented
modelled =modeled
Alex would find himself entering a new 'region' of the metropolis every so often, and each 'region' seemed to be modelled after a distinct section of the planet. - D_R_001210mthCommented
Rouge joined Rouge?
At that time, Batibat, Orcus, and Rouge joined Rouge and the other two already seated at the table. They weren't the only ones that came in carrying trays of food; a number of other demons as they were called, both incubi and succubi, did as well. - D_R_001211mthCommentedCh 41 Chapter 41: Best option for her!