so we'll written that it brought me to tears, and that doesn't happen very often.

story roped me in for sure! nice

great way to start their story!

very enjoyable to read!

I really like the story. you have made their characters so strongly defined that I can see how these things could happen.

love your characters

great dialogue

I love the characters so far. Your descrive turn of phrase and quick moving story is very good.

I love the positive energy of your book! Great message to live by. The only poor comment I have is regarding translation. The director should have been "revived", which means re-energized not "reviled", which means hated or despised. Otherwise your story is well done. I wish you much success in your future endeavors.

Excellent story!! Can't wait to see what happens next