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So, I was thinking of starting over again, since I have forgotten some of the stuff that has happened due to long periods between chapters. I was thinking that since he has been translating the chapters more often now, maybe he will be nearly finished by the time I catch up again ...
does he never bring the beqr out anymore? Will he ever bring it out again?
Well, maybe is she hadn't eaten her breakfast on the ground ...
these names are such a mouthfull...
buried? or bought?
can't he just take the memories like he did before he became a beast tamer?
no air in the ground*
you should probably reword this to "more numb" rather than number. When I read it, I thought he was getting numbers ... he got a 2, now he got a 13, now he got a 6 ... rewording it will clarify without the need to read it over to try to understand it
uhhh, i thought he already knew that the female guard was laying on the ground, passed out ... now suddenly he doesn't know anyone was still there?
At this point, I am wondering if APRIL stands for something and not an actual name. It is always fully capitalized when APRIL says it and when it is shown on his status. The only time it is written as a name is when Elliot says it.
you use too many explanation points, especially when they are not needed
her* the teacher is a her, not a him.
where did the extra 3 evolved kobolds come from?
where did the 2 ordinary kobolds come from?