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Orden139925dCommentedFinally someone actually spelt potato potahto right !thank you!
"Potato, potahto," Dr. Thomas said, amused.- Orden13992mthCommented
Don't forget that the Mc is basically changing everything so a few episodes not happening the same or at all is fine. Just make sure your ideas are implemented the way you want so that it makes sense to you
I've read a comment recommending a story time skip, and I understand why, but I really can't do it until some events later. I need to go through something important that happens in season two of Young Sheldon (I'm reading theories, careful Victor, I'm watching you). - Orden13994mthCommented
That is the life of the rich.
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People who will have his back. Remove he so the sentence flows better
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If you can't say it I will
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Convention not convection
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Penny
" Well I'm not very good with it, but I can help you guys with the basics." Panny suggested to which Hermione nodded her head so fast that Harry felt it would fall off her shoulders. - Orden13998mthCommentedCh 22 Ch.22
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Shouldn't it be destabilize?
Nick had waited until after he was dismissed from class on Friday and locked himself in the workshop with Helena and Flitwick because he will need both of their help for this particular venture. He had taken into consideration how long it would take him to complete this ring and including resting to replenish his energy it will take no less than two and a half days. Helena and Flitwick's role during this time was to ensure that the enchantment never stabilized as he restored his energy. If it ever did he would be forced to start over again ruining all his previous work.- - Orden13998mthCommented
Personnel instead of personal
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Entail not until
My ears perk up as I respond, "Ohh, what might this deal until Mr Ozius." - Orden13998mthCommented
Should be 10
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No based off but no furryness
"Not the wolf part!" She retorted angrily before throwing her tiny fist at Abraham from afar. "But I will be going to Transylvannia to meet my grandparents. It is only for a week, and I will be back before the 4th (of July)." Enid explained. - Orden13998mthReplied to The_Lazy_Panda
Instead of Billy Jack the name of the movie was Death Wish
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Used Luke instead of Ethan
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Death wish is the American Name
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No excuses! CONSTANT VIGILANCE!!!
(AN: I've read some comments about why Zephyr's not always aware of his surroundings even though he's basically a pseudo-Batman, so I'll explain my train of thought. Batman was always aware of his surrounding because he HAD to. He lived in Gotham. A city where someone like the Joker, the Riddler or Scarecrow could attack at any time. As if that wasn't enough, you had people like Amanda Waller and Lex Luthor outside of Gotham. In comparison, Zephyr lives in suburban California so there's no need for him to always be aware of his surroundings.)