this isn't really a valid argument. Even if it takes 3-7 days for someone to awaken with the large spheres, im sure ppl would take the opportunity to have extra stamina if it meant having to touch a stone for like a month. Its too big of a boon.

it is kinda a plot hole, but it was explained that system users have immense plot armor, and even in ridiculous scenarios will make it out. With this in mind, the training the MC is doing does seem kind of pointless, but maybe he thinks that it will give him more of a edge.

hate for him wouldn't have been so unfounded

why would people continue to bully him, especially to this extent. It seems like he's in a catatonic state, not being able to move or speak. It would be like bullying a statue. I have to imagine that people would get bored of it at some point, and at least not put in as much effort as they are. Also, if the king really did care about him enough to take care of him for 14 years, I assume he would have heard of the mass harassment. It seems like everyone is literally destroying his body, and there has to be someone who would report it to the king. It feels like a super contrived way to create trauma or resentment in the mc. This is just my opinion, but it would have made more sense if he had done something to the general populace. Maybe he accidentally pressed something or tripped into a lever that released a dam, lowering the cities water supply and causing a super harsh winter. Then the peoples Vehement hate for him wouldn't be so unfounded.

I think u need to add "I" or "We" before Will

nervously*

this seems weird, if she was already strong enough to be in the top 5 strongest of the church, with what i'm assuming is a almost doubled strength, speed and more, she should be able to handle people better than this. Another thing is that she would probably need to get accustomed to the new power she gained, but that's just a small nitpick

I found this book through recommended and im not dissapointed. The writing quality is very good, with minimal to no grammatical errors, and flows well. Update stability is a bit rough, but its to be expected from people writing in their free time. If i remember correctly egotistical (author) is hoping for a chap a week. Story development is good, were only 5 chaps in, but the world is slowly expanding, and so are the characters. Our mc is a monster with developing intelligence, so i assume they will develop more character as well, and without spoilers with powers that be all seem unique and interesting. Character design is decent, but i can't really say much as i haven't seen much. im focusing more on physical design as i elaborated my opinion above, Most characters have unique appearances when possible, but a lot of the cast is of a race without much difference in design. The world background seems to a classic fantasy world, with a couple changes that make it interesting, i wont go into it but i'm hoping the author continues to develop unique traits and make the world interesting. That's all i want to write, i recommend the book

good chapter

kinda a clunky way to tell us her powers

its a tough one

this must be the reason, i recently killed my family over a undercooked potato.

good chapter, dont rip your ribcage out of your bleeding chest, that would be sad

good chapter

same

this wasn't the point of the comment, they were asking why something that can be produced by the thousands every day in just one area is so expensive. Assuming they aren't the only orchard that produces the apples they should be way cheaper.

why were they being so hostile if the point of the ritual was to bring them back to life. Surely they would want to keep good relationships with the survivors, and making them think they were being executed would just make the whole situation more complicated and difficult

death by gallows takes anywhere from 10-20 mins, A quick death is probably way better than slowly getting strangled to death.

Do you have a release schedule, or is it random?

Alot of things can be used as a weapon, the chair that he picked up earlier could bash someone head in. Maybe it has something to do with his thoughts towards the items use?