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It was such a beautifully amazing comic. The story line was awesome too. I'm just disappointed that it ended all so soon. Dear author will there be a season 2? If you happen to write a season 2 please tag me so that I won't miss it ever. Thank you for this lovely comic. I love Fuyu and little fox, blacky and little dragon the most. I was mesmerized by the beauty of Bai se.
*pulsed
She's getting braver
*back of her mind
*into Rhys' bathroom
*him to the bedroom
It was indeed perfect. This was such a wonderful chapter. Started off with a raging emotional rollercoaster and slowly and gradually shifted to the wonderful colours of love and the sweetest confessions. Now one more person is yet to realise his true feelings. I think he too has to go through a somewhat similar experience to realise it. I feel sorry for Bea coz she has to endure not one but too rollercoasters. But it will be paid off with equal love and double passion I suppose, which I can't wait to read.
In this chapter I felt the intensity of his pain and suffering, the depth of his loathing and rage, how terrified he is and his helplessness. I felt like I just wanted to hug him and comfort him. I hope he will come out of his trance sooner. Except for little repetition this chapter was awesome.
Sure dear.
Thank you for accepting my suggestion in a positive way. I'm looking forward to reading more of your creations. All the best.
I like this story. But so much repetition is happening throughout the story, either the same sentence or in a paraphrased way. It is quite annoying. If you can change it, thos story is going to be more awesome. Your language and presentation is marvelous.
in the first paragraph it was said that the meeting is held in a private restaurant arranged by Harry's family, How come it's Harry's home now?
Except for the language issue this story is awesome. Worth reading. I loved it and have been searching for the next one in line as it is mentioned in the epilogue but couldn't find it. Does anyone know where I can find it?