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saberfate09u

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  • saberfate09u
    saberfate09u2yr
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    The story has a good plot at the beginning, but the main character potential of the author is completely wasted, but the main character is not used by the author. I had a hard time reading until the last chapter, I couldn't bear to read any more.

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    I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World
    Sci-fi · Morning Star LL
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  • saberfate09u
    saberfate09u2yr
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    I'm in episode 505

    altalt
    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • saberfate09u
    saberfate09u2yr
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    it's a good story but the development of the story is completely rubbish at the beginning the story is good but the main character has no power to protect anything he values ​​he just says I will hide behind his daughter I want her to be happy but he has no strength to protect the girl even if he dies the author tried as much as possible to make the main character weak buddha As if it's not enough, he is making zero effort to get stronger even though he has enemies everywhere. It just seems like he's trying to get stronger but there is no effort, just words, nothing else. The main character design may actually be nice, but the story history is extremely slow, but the development is terrible.

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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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