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Seriously? from the fact that a group killed him, unless he wants to go crazy from isolation, shouldn't he focus on forming a group? brainwashing people into serving his goals, killing for him and killing preemptively all his enemies? I feel like rebirth has made him dumber. Why not use the same weapon that killed you instead of being a loner again.
Ok. My bad when I stopped reading there wasn't any other chapter but I see on the next one he met the healer. In the end I gave up on the story, the English is making it hard for me to understand what is going on. The story seems interesting but I get confused too much reading it. I stopped at the first arena battle when he asked the old lady to go get stuff for saving her grandson. Good luck author.
Very good book currently at chap 7. Not sure how the story will unfold. I noticed the characters were waiting for the military to help them lol....In a carribean country? That's unlikely unless they have someone who has connections among them. So far so good, I guess the main things that can make the novel go sideways are the future interactions with the new team members (Amelia's boyfriend seems already like a future headache), how they get off the island, they find their families in the US and also kennen will most likely have to go to china to find his family. I guess all these elements can be future arcs of the storyline. Honestly the level of writing is pretty good except for some typo here and there but nothing major!! Also, I love that the "system" isn't prominent as in other novel. At this point it may have even been better if there was no system as it is not really giving them any advantage and it would make the novel more realistic. The downsides is that they wouldn't know anything about their powers and the storylines would be longer to make them figure it out. Hopefully you don't become a system junkie author. Good luck. Please try to increase the frequency of updates.
most likely the other one I think.
Author it is only chapter 198. You should find a way to build something here but try to incorporate a love triangle. It is Crete the most used trop on tv shows and drama but it works!! in keeping readers engaged and guessing who the lead will end up with. Like Harry Potter first girlfriend, last girlfriend, like the vampire diaries, etc. I feel like that is the next level in human relationship that most of the writers on this platform cannot master so they go the easy road and do harem instead of confronting the difficuties, confusion, doubts of love triangles. I feel like the way the lead is growing and maturing could be a good basis for that.