semangat terus Thor dalam berkarya, ceritanya membuat penasaran, eh ini karya pertama yah untuk Female Lead [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
in terms of story, plot and so on, it's good, but in terms of writing, it needs a little improvement, especially the point of view used. the rest is worthy of a contract đđ
the idea of ââthe story is very good and makes the reader curious, it's just the way of writing that makes it confusing. need to pay attention again to the writing thor
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karya terbaru, semoga seperti yang lainnya.
semangat Thor. tapi saran saja sih untuk fokus selesaikan yang satu dulu baru buat baru [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]