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Jaritorin

Jaritorin

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Just your every day Joe, nothing else

2020-06-13 JoinedUnited States
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin6mth
    Replied to Dakota_Morrison

    Because they separated them before Adam went down the city underground and kept her as a hostage to make sure he wouldn't make a run for it. Adam told her to hide in case that the hideout was attacked and she wouldn't be in danger.

    "Would you look at that, you might offer a better service than I thought." The bastard who had me kicked down the gutter came before us, with an arm over Io's shoulder…
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    Jaritorin8mth
    Replied to wolfzsong_h

    That is good and all, but I changed the way Vestiges are viewed into a more of a story in 3rd person focusing on a character with some exposition dropped in about the world or clarifying the situation as that is far easier and less messier than this type of vague writing. just wanted to try and translate the way scenarios were presented inside the Vestiges from the game into words.

    (A/N: Could you imagine this as a memory echo in a vestige? Tell me.)
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    Jaritorin8mth
    Replied to DvD_007

    yeah, has there ever been an explanation for them to not wear armor other than adding fan service for sales and such?

    Also, I kind of forgot to change how Oliver's blood veil should look a bit more like tactical armor since it's really damn dumb that blood veils don't protect your heart…
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin8mth
    Replied to meijin_alive

    😭 why he crying?

    She nodded in agreement. "Let's satiate our thirst first." She stood up and looked in a certain direction.
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin8mth
    Replied to UsedCreation

    not adding dlc to the fanfic

    {℉ʋŔŢĤëʀ βεĻɵὡ}
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Commented

    :(

    "Don't worry, because it is natural for your future boyfriend to call you that, and I already told you that you can call me Kaminari, didn't I?" I tease her
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    MHA: Reborn as Denki Kaminari
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Posted

    The Author's grasp of the ching chong narration is top notch. It really feels like reading the novel from someone's else perspective who knows how to call out Nie Li's hypocrisy.

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    TDG: Antagonist's System (Fanfic) (DROPPED)
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to Quake_Midaro

    "yes" to romance, "no" to it being the main point of the ff. just a part of it.

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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Commented

    💀

    Damn, learning science and biology be so fine, and then boom! Scientists name an old fossil from the Cretaceous era "N!g€rsaurus"!
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Commented

    Turritopsis' Cycle of life

    Its cells will never die. The organism will never cease to function. It will never decompose. It will be everlasting.
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Commented

    Normal Cycle of a jellyfish

    After enough nutrients are consumed, the polyp will become a stack of cloned, nearly jellyfish. When the most mature one is ready, it will be released and float into the water to eat and grow into a medusa, reproduce, and die, continuing the cycle.
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Posted

    Figured I should leave a review after the 3rd re-read of this.

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    My Hero Academia: Reborn as Denki Kaminari (COMPLETED)
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to Michemancer_Obi

    Let them come!

    "Stop flirting and sit down!!!" Rin shouted towards the couple.
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to Winter_Metor

    compared to the normal revenants, yes. There stll are successors and Juzo Mido

    Ch 24 The Path To Strength Is Covered In Blood, Your Blood
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to DementionMan_626
    "Stop flirting and sit down!!!" Rin shouted towards the couple.
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to BattleKing10000

    The fic might have 80k words at the moment, but MC has been in Code Vein for 9 days. His first goal is adapting and becoming stronger. can't do much about Io besides guiding her into developing her own interests for her own good and his, even if those interests are somehow related to helping MC as she is his attendant.

    Ch 24 The Path To Strength Is Covered In Blood, Your Blood
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Commented

    This lil sword is what MC is using now.

    His muscles contracted and expanded. The adrenaline in his veins aided his pain receptors dull enough to keep his mind focused on his ongoing task and remain uninterrupted. Kicking off the ground, he twisted his waist as his core leaned forward and transferred his entire momentum to his zweihander.
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to TheFantasyReader

    It's just good eyesight. No heat sensor to see through walls or anything. No way the Queen that can use lightning, fire, ice, and summon small spikes of judgment to throw arround like Rods of God would just have good eyesight. (It's stated that Jack can see the state of other relics with the eye of the Queen inplanted in him but I'm planning on adding more to that cuz that just kind of lame...)Blood relic only allows the user to soothe other relic users and revive blood springs and mistles. Adam is hella weak right now, even the basic lost beats him in strength at the moment, he can't even use a gift to save his life.

    I was getting the hang of fighting in this new body. That and the talent I've taken from the original owner did wonders too. The fast decision-making in the heat of battle, seconds that didn't feel longer but something akin to attaining a certain clarity. Like going from 30 fps to 120 fps. The seconds don't last long but I could process a lot more than before.
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  • Jaritorin
    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to GardenDevil

    that's "chorro" I believe.

    "Wanna eat a Churro?" Kazuya pointed to the Churro stand nearby.
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    Jaritorin9mth
    Replied to BattleKing10000

    Chapter 18 (Business) it's mentioned that Adam called her "flat" while in the hot springs that led him to making it up to her in helping the girl doing maintenance on the equipment... he also absorbed venom with the blood veil which isn't good for it at all and almost ruined it. He used it against the boss in chap 14 when it was obviously bleeding venom that almost worked as acid since it burned Adam's wound while it healed. Blood Veils might work as sturdy armor but draining anything but Ichor can mess its inner workings.

    Ch 22 No Pain No Gain
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