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_Dr_Doctor_1yrCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4 — First Impression- _Dr_Doctor_1yrPosted
- _Dr_Doctor_1yrCommentedCh 56 The Will To Survive III
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The idea is good, but the execution is mediocre. There would be more descriptions of some, otherwise events happen very quickly, crumpled. Also, the logic of the protagonist is kind of strange, like, seriously? By the appearance of the fetus, determine that he does not have a weakness for water? Well, this is just my opinion, based on reading the first and, a little, the second chapter, maybe further and better, but I could not resist and wrote about it. P. S. I mostly rated it by accident.
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I ran straight towards him and slashed my katana at his stomach of course it passed through however the attack was supposed to miss and the sludge villain was supposed to hit me. He did and pierced right trough my left lung. It was worth it though as then Midoriya cam running in to help me. The last thing I saw before my eyes closed was a blond haired man with a smile on his face. - _Dr_Doctor_2yrCommentedCh 17 Southern hideout and Karin
- _Dr_Doctor_2yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5 - A Productive Meeting
- _Dr_Doctor_2yrCommentedCh 116 The frustration of manga pause shrink! The first episode of the Naruto anime!detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- _Dr_Doctor_2yrCommentedCh 4 Previously Titled As “Title Test” I Made This When I’m Still New To This Site I Don’t Know How To Delete This So I Use It To Scribble My Nonsensical Ideas
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As for me, limiters will be a good solution, if only because you can write with them more different interesting scenes and moments.
This chapter has been deleted. - _Dr_Doctor_2yrCommentedCh 17 Southern hideout and Karin
- _Dr_Doctor_2yrCommentedCh 42 Merry Christmas!
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Option 8, since in this way he can become a mercenary or somehow else make money and at the same time influence the plot, it will also be easier because of this to add your own plot arcs. He may not be accepted into magic knights due to his low amount of mana or because of the danger of his magic and destructiveness, although he will have to come up with something with black bulls.
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