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The story itself is super interesting and I like it but after the free chapters the story gets so hard to read. The grammar and paragraphs are awkward. It suddenly gets confusing from the flip flopping of pronouns for the characters. I'm not sure if it's just translation errors or mistakes. I probably pick it back up if it gets fixed.
I accidentally stumbled on this work and since I had a limited free read time for it I decided to give it a chance. I absolutely love the story. The characters are well developed and entertaining. the description of locations are the perfect blend, so not overly or underly described, giving the reader the chance to see their own imagery. I appreciate the pace of the story as well, not too fast and not too slow. Other than a few very small typing errors, the book is absolutely perfect in my opinion. I would definitely recommend giving this book a try.