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I know it may seem like a gratuitous hater, but honestly I wouldn't waste part of my life reading something I don't like and want to see finished, and it's just a criticism about a part of the fanfic that I found pretty meh in comparison to the entire work. , mainly because this plot drops a lot in quality compared to any other that has already been made.
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Like an ancient goddes of ice, who was reincarnated as Naruto's twin sister said: "Balance is as important or more than just cultivation, if you just came out of closed door cultivation, go out and have fun with some women, If you just have an enlightenment go out and have a fight"
Idk is a good novel, the grammar isn't good, but you can read. But man the mc, i mean he reincarnated 12 or 13 years ago, the relationship with Alice is rushed, of course, but is good they act like a couple, but he is so shy and don't have any confidence when talking with Annabeth, i mean they met and then he accepts her beats him even if they don't know each other, and i just want to ask why? The mc have a romantic relationship with Alice, so even if she "beats" him is nothing serious is more like a couple, but with Annabeth idk is like meh.